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1、 人生感悟 人生感悟類話題是?？紵衢T話題之一，包括從日常生活方生的事情當(dāng)中感悟的道理，考生可以把這些重點(diǎn)話題多練練。 命題者可能從以下一些角度命題： 1.幸福 幸福是什么?幸福是父母為你營(yíng)造的溫馨的家，幸福是老師望向你的贊許的目光，幸福是孤獨(dú)時(shí)朋友送來(lái)的一杯奶茶，幸福是……。 2.感恩 對(duì)父母心存感恩，因?yàn)樗麄兘o予我生命，讓我健康成長(zhǎng);對(duì)老師心存感恩，因?yàn)樗麄兘o了我教誨，讓我拋卻愚昧;對(duì)朋友心存感恩，因?yàn)樗麄兘o了我友愛;對(duì)社會(huì)心存感恩，因?yàn)樯鐣?huì)給了我智慧和力量。自從國(guó)家實(shí)施義務(wù)教育以來(lái)，書本免費(fèi)，食宿免費(fèi)，而且還有貧困助學(xué)金等。面對(duì)這些，我們應(yīng)該心存感恩，感謝祖國(guó)對(duì)我們的厚望

2、和期盼。讓我們永遠(yuǎn)記住：感謝父母、感謝老師、感謝朋友、感謝全社會(huì)! 3. 過(guò)程比結(jié)果更重要 安靜地享受過(guò)程遠(yuǎn)比匆忙地尋求結(jié)果更智慧，更受人推崇。除此之外，對(duì)結(jié)果毫無(wú)耐心也不值得提倡，因?yàn)樗鼤?huì)使人們行動(dòng)魯莽，注重結(jié)果，破壞期待。 4. 行動(dòng)的力量 行動(dòng)越多，積累的經(jīng)驗(yàn)、技能越多，距離終點(diǎn)越近。夢(mèng)想引導(dǎo)行動(dòng)，行動(dòng)實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想。 5. 努力創(chuàng)造機(jī)會(huì) 努力創(chuàng)造機(jī)會(huì)總是必要的，也是值得的。尤其是在這個(gè)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)激烈的社會(huì)。等到機(jī)會(huì)從天而降很大程度上會(huì)導(dǎo)致過(guò)一種枯燥而沒(méi)有成就的生活。 一.話題常用單詞 1.impact影響 2.affection喜愛 3. ambition 決心 4

3、. assessment評(píng)價(jià) 5. campaign活動(dòng) 6. abolish廢除 7. acquire獲取 8. allocate分配 9. appeal to吸引 10. accommodate供給, 調(diào)節(jié) 11. arise出現(xiàn) 12.assume假設(shè) 13.attain獲得, 得到 14. blossom開花 15.boom興旺 16. achievement 成就 17. adaptation適應(yīng) 18. adventure冒險(xiǎn) 19. association聯(lián)系 20. barrier障礙 21.willpower/persistence毅

4、力 22.withstand challenges經(jīng)得住挑戰(zhàn) 23.aggressive有進(jìn)取心的 24.energetic精力充沛的 25.striving spirit進(jìn)取精神 26.open-mindednes心胸開闊 27.widen one’s knowledge增長(zhǎng)見識(shí) 28.innovation創(chuàng)新 29.self-confidence自信心 30.ambition雄心壯志 31. be happy / sad / upset / nervous / lonely高興/難過(guò)/不安 /緊張/孤獨(dú) 32.be pleased with對(duì)……感到高興 33. b

5、e worried about / worry about 擔(dān)心，擔(dān)憂 34.be / get angry with sb. about sth. 因某事生某人的氣 35. be disappointed at sb. 對(duì)某人感到失望 36. be confident of sth. / in sb. 對(duì)某事/某人有信心 二.話題常用短語(yǔ) 1.不可否認(rèn) It is undeniable that./There is no denying that. 2.采取措施 take effective measures to do sth./something effective mus

6、t be done to. 3.充分利用 make full use of/take advantage of 4.大有裨益 do good to/be beneficial to 5.導(dǎo)致引起 lead to/give rise to/contribute to 6.對(duì)……有害 do harm to/be harmful to 7.奉獻(xiàn)社會(huì) make contributions to society 8.毫無(wú)疑問(wèn) Undoubtedly/There is no doubt that 9.交流思想 exchange ideas/emotions/informatio

7、n 10.交流情感 exchange emotions 11.解壓減負(fù) relieve stress/burden 12.經(jīng)濟(jì)負(fù)擔(dān) financial burden 13.開闊眼界 broaden one's vision 14.課業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān) too much homework/heavy burden of homework 15.普遍認(rèn)為 It is commonly believed /recognized that 16.恰恰相反 in contrast/on the contrary 17.熱烈討論 have a heated discussion/deb

8、ate 18.投身于 be devoted to 19.心理負(fù)擔(dān) psychological burden with 20.揚(yáng)長(zhǎng)避短 adopt one's good points and avoid the shortcomings 21.引起關(guān)注 draw public attention 22.與某相比 compared with/in comparison 23.與時(shí)俱進(jìn) keep pace with times 24.自然資源 valuable natural resources 25.綜合素質(zhì) comprehensive quality 26.遵

9、守秩序 observe public order/observe discipline 27.把時(shí)間精力放在……上 focus one's time and energy on 28.不可推卸的義務(wù) unshakable duty 29.產(chǎn)生有利影響 have positive effects on 30.產(chǎn)生不利影響 have negative effects on 31.持不同態(tài)度 hold different attitudes towards 32.考慮到多方面因素 take many factors into account/consideration 3

10、3.擴(kuò)大知識(shí)面 expand one's scope of knowledge 34.切實(shí)減輕我們的課業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān) effectively reduce our heavy homework assignments 35.身心兩方面 both physically and mentally 36.我們生活的各方面 in all aspects of human life 37.因特網(wǎng)方便快捷 It's convenient and efficient to use computer and the Internet. 三、參考語(yǔ)句 話題常用句型 1. We are deeply

11、 grateful to you for your support. 我們深深感謝你的支持。 2. It is a pity that we shall have to leave tomorrow. 我們明天必須離開，真是遺憾。 3.To begin with, “No pains, no gains”should always be our motto in our life and work. 我們應(yīng)當(dāng)始終把“沒(méi)有付出就沒(méi)有收獲”當(dāng)作工作學(xué)習(xí)的座右銘。 4.Only those who are hard-working and brave enough to encounter

12、 difficulties of all sorts are most likely to reach the summit of success.zx&xk 只有那些努力工作，不畏困難的人才能到達(dá)成功的頂峰。 5. We should embrace positive attitudes and behave confidently. 我們應(yīng)該具有積極的態(tài)度，并且表現(xiàn)自信。 6. Only in this way can we crack down the difficulties confronting us successfully and lead a happy life.

13、 只有這樣，我們才能克服我們面對(duì)的困難，過(guò)幸福的生活。 7. On the way of life, we shouldn’t focus merely on one or two success.在人生的道路上，我們不能僅僅滿足于一兩次的成功。 8. Only through persistent pursuit can we be able to make progress and development.只有不斷地追求，我們才能夠取得進(jìn)步和發(fā)展。 9. Persistence functions as an indispensable driving force to keep u

14、p our spirit and to assist us to fulfill our study and work. 堅(jiān)持是我們保持精神向上的不可或缺的驅(qū)動(dòng)力，并且能夠幫助我們完成自己的學(xué)習(xí)和工作。 10. In fact, only those who are hard-working and brave enough to encounter obstacles of all sorts are most likely to reach the summit of success. 事實(shí)上，只有那些努力的、勇敢的人才能克服各種困難，才更有可能摘得成功的桂冠。 11. The s

15、ecret to happiness is to keep setting yourself new challenges. 幸福的秘訣就是要不停地給自己設(shè)定新的挑戰(zhàn)。 12. Undoubtedly the cartoon conveys the meaning that life is like the process of running in which one should make constant efforts and never stop making progress. 毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，這幅畫顯示了人生就像跑步的過(guò)程一樣，人們應(yīng)該做出不斷的努力，而且決不要停止前進(jìn)。

16、【典例01】 （2015年重慶卷）請(qǐng)就以下話題，按要求用英文寫作。 If you could give your younger self one piece of advice, what would you say? 要求： （1）作出回答并說(shuō)出理由； （2）詞數(shù)不少于60； （3）在答題卡上做答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________

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18、__________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ 【寫作指導(dǎo)】 本文屬于考查開放性作文寫作，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。寫作時(shí)采用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過(guò)去時(shí)。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)

19、完整的整體。 meaningful activities to enrich my life．Z*xxk 【典例02】 （2015湖北卷）請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。 Questioning is a bridge to learning. When you begin to doubt something and search for an answer, you will learn. 注意： 1.無(wú)須寫標(biāo)題； 2.除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限； 3.內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的具體事例； 4.文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 5.詞數(shù)不少于120，如引用提示語(yǔ)則

20、不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

21、_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【寫作指導(dǎo)】 本文是一篇開放式作文，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：(1)引入話題；(2)介紹自己的事例；??(3)做出總結(jié)，首尾呼應(yīng)。要求根據(jù)提示，并結(jié)合具體事例，完成一篇英語(yǔ)短文?？忌鷮懽髦氨仨氄J(rèn)真審題，注意描述具體事例時(shí)要用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，人稱用第一人稱，內(nèi)容緊緊圍繞所給的主

22、題，最后要有總結(jié)，形成首尾呼應(yīng)。選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體。 【范文賞析】 Questioning can lead to searching for an answer. If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true, we can find the correct answer and learn more． Two years ago，our teacher offere

23、d us an answer to a difficult math problem in class．Although the answer seemed a little strange，nobody but I doubted it．Thinking that his solution might be wrong，I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way．Half an hour later，I managed to find the correct answer．When

24、I showed my answer to him，the teacher praised me for my independent thinking． From this experience I have learnt that questioning can serve as a bridge that helps us to seek the truth． 【典例03】 （2016湖南懷化高三上聯(lián)考）假設(shè)你的筆友Tony因上期高三期末數(shù)學(xué)考試未及格而倍受打擊，情緒低落。請(qǐng)你 (王華)寫一封信給他，鼓勵(lì)他重拾自信，實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想。 注意： 1、詞數(shù)不少于120個(gè)； 2、不

25、能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

26、_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文賞析】 Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear that you failed in the last final math exam, but what worries me most is that you are

27、in low spirits when facing failure. As senior three students, we all have taken examinations of different types and experienced failure as well as success. There is no doubt that we should take positive attitudes towards our setbacks. We should spare no efforts to analyze the cause of failure, whic

28、h could help us escape repeating the similar mistakes. Only when we find out the cause of our failure can we make progress in our study. As for your anxiety, I think doing some sports is good for you because it can give you some time to be refreshed in both body and mind so that we can go on with ou

29、r learning energetically and efficiently. I hope all above can help you a lot. Let’s work hard together and turn our dream into reality. Yours， Wang Hua 【典例04】 （2016湖北四校高三階段） 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合

30、生活中的一個(gè)事例，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。Optimism always leads to happiness, health and success while pessimism, by contrast, results in hopelessness, sickness and failure. That’s because optimists and pessimists deal with the same challenges and disappointments in very different ways. 注意： 1、無(wú)須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)； 2、除詩(shī)歌之外，文體

31、不限； 3、內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合生活中的一個(gè)事例； 4、文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 5、詞數(shù)為120左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

32、_________________________________ 【范文賞析】 Optimism is important in all aspects of our life. If you can change your mind from pessimism，you can change your life. Up to the beginning of Senior Grade Two，I did poorly in my English but I didn’t give in because I was always encouraged by both the peop

33、le around me and myself. I kept practicing speaking，listening，reading and writing. When I was fed up with reading or writing，I usually entertained myself by reading some interesting English stories，jokes and humors or seeing English films. When I had some trouble in reciting or memorizing，I tried to

34、 amuse myself by playing word games or singing English songs. By this means，I always made myself cheerful and optimistic，full of splendid and colorful dreams of future. I kept practicing. Gradually，I made progress in my English. Thanks to the optimism，I have become one of the top students in my cl

35、ass by now. （1） 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合生活中的一個(gè)事例，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。Never be afraid of making mistakes. Factually, making progress is making mistakes. Mistakes reveal where success lies. 注意： 1. 無(wú)須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)； 2. 附詩(shī)歌外，文體不限； 3. 文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 4. 詞數(shù)為120左右 ________________________________________________________

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37、________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Sometimes mistakes can open up new horizons. Many scientists may make a great number of mistakes before they make a discovery. British scientist Alexander Fleming wrongly left his experi

38、ment room window open, which led to his discovery of penicillin, a powerful modern medicine. We should not be afraid of making mistakes, because sometimes through mistakes there can be more discovery or progress. Just as an old saying goes, “experience is the mother of wisdom” 的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)

39、要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。 【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章使用了很好的短語(yǔ)和句子：bear in mind 記住，In my opinion在我看來(lái), regard… as認(rèn)為…是， open up new horizons開闊新的視野，afraid of 害怕，Mistakes are the best teachers who guide us through difficulties. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句，Therefore, the first thing we should bear in mind is that m

40、istakes are actually stepping stones to our progress. 這句話用了表語(yǔ)從句和定語(yǔ)從句， British scientist Alexander Fleming wrongly left his experiment room window open, which led to his discovery of penicillin, a powerful modern medicine.這句話用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句， Just as an old saying goes, “experience is the mother of wisdom”

41、這是一句諺語(yǔ)。 （2） 作為一名高三學(xué)生的你，明年即將畢業(yè)。現(xiàn)在校報(bào)征稿，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀銓?duì)高三生活的體會(huì)和建議。 1. 對(duì)老師與家長(zhǎng)的關(guān)愛表示感謝； 2. 向與自己發(fā)生過(guò)矛盾的同學(xué)表達(dá)歉意； 3. 努力學(xué)習(xí)，實(shí)現(xiàn)人生夢(mèng)想； 4. 對(duì)學(xué)弟、學(xué)妹的建議。 注意： 1. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫； 2. 詞數(shù)：100 左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)）。 High school is always considered as the most cherished period of one’ s life. As a Senior 3 stude

42、nt, it won’t be long before I graduate. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

43、______________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 High school is always considered as the most cherished period of one’s life. As a Senior 3 student, it won’t be long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow stude

44、nts. Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation of help from those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, it's high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and sm

45、iles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, I've made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, "No pains, no gains." Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for n

46、o men. 【寫作指導(dǎo)】 不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔。 【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，運(yùn)用了一些詞組：Above all首要的是，最重要的是, made up my mind to do下決心做，make every effort to do努力做，make full use of充分利用，范文中的句式多變，運(yùn)用不同的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)： I would like to show my appreciation of help from those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included.這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做定

47、語(yǔ)， it's high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship這句話用了固定句型. it's high time to do該做什么了…，just as the old saying goes, "No pains, no gains."? time and tide wait for no men.這兩句是諺語(yǔ)，還有范文還使用 Firstly, Secondly, Finally這樣的詞使文章更加連貫

48、。 （3） 隨著社會(huì)對(duì)“富二代”各方面負(fù)面新聞不斷的報(bào)道。最近你校學(xué)生就“金錢是否能帶來(lái)幸福”? 這一話題進(jìn)行了一場(chǎng)激烈的辯論，辯論的結(jié)果如下表所示： 正方 反方 1．錢非常重要，生活離不開錢； 2．錢可以幫助我們解決很多問(wèn)題 3．錢使我們的生活更舒適。 1．金錢不是萬(wàn)能的； 2．金錢買不到幸福和健康； 3．過(guò)分在乎金錢就會(huì)失去人生的意義 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上素材為某英語(yǔ)報(bào)刊寫一篇英語(yǔ)稿件，介紹這次辯論的內(nèi)容，并談?wù)勎覀儜?yīng)該如何看待金錢。 ? 注意：1.詞數(shù) 100 左右 ??????? 2.開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； ??????? 3.不要逐條翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以行文

49、連貫。 Recently we have had a discussion about whether money can bring us happiness. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

50、____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Recently I have had a debate about whether money

51、 can bring us happiness. The students have different opinions. Some students think that money is so important that we couldn’t survive without money. Besides, money can help us to solve many problems in life. In addition, it is money that allows us to live a comfortable life. Others, however, have

52、 opposite opinion. They think money doesn’t mean everything. For example, money cannot buy happiness or health. If we attach too much importance to money, we cannot find the real meaning of life, and nor can we find pleasure in life. Personally, we should not regard money as everything. Money is ju

53、st a tool that helps us to get what we need. We should use it wisely and properly. Only in this way can we enjoy life to the fullest. 但里面的內(nèi)容句式要富于變化，要注意遣詞造句，層次清晰，語(yǔ)句連貫。 【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如help sb. do，allow sb to do，live a … life，for example, attach … to …，in this way；還運(yùn)用句型nor引導(dǎo)的部分倒裝句，only

54、放句首引導(dǎo)的倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：besides, in addition, however, for example, personally等等。 （4） 美國(guó)已故大演說(shuō)家、”成功學(xué)家鼻祖”羅曼·文森特·皮爾有一句名言：”Attitude Is Everything”。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)創(chuàng)碛姓_的人生態(tài)度的重要性,詞數(shù)120左右。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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56、___________________________________________ 【范文】 As a saying goes, “Attitude is everything.” It means our attitude will decide whether we will succeed or not in the future. If we take a positive attitude and keep on trying , we will achieve our goals in the end. ?I can’t agree more with this view

57、. At one time I was not good at English, which made me very depressed. Then I realized that I had to do well in English to go to my favorite university. I talked with my teacher about my problem, who offered some valuable advice to me. With my teacher’s help, I improved my English gradually. ? My s

58、tory shows that if we have a good attitude and keep on trying, we will be able to overcome difficulty and move on. It is our attitude that plays a key role in our life. 候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。 【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文主題明確，夾敘夾議，在語(yǔ)言上用了一些常見的短語(yǔ)：can’t agree more with, take a positive attitude采取積極的態(tài)度， With m

59、y teacher’s help 在老師的幫助下，句式上也是富有變化：As a saying goes, “Attitude is everything.” It means our attitude will decide whether we will succeed or not in the future. 這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句， At one time I was not good at English, which made me very depressed.和I talked with my teacher about my problem, who offered some v

60、aluable advice to me., 這兩句話用了定語(yǔ)從句， It is our attitude that plays a key role in our life.這句話用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句。 (5) Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 請(qǐng)仔細(xì)觀察圖片，描述圖片內(nèi)容，并以生活中發(fā)生的一件事情說(shuō)明圖片所說(shuō)明的內(nèi)涵。 注意：詞數(shù)不少于120。 _______________________________________________________

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62、_________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Several days ago, two of my friends had a fierce quarrel. Both of them hold their own view without considering the other’s. One of them wanted to go to the bookshop first, while the other wan

63、ted to finish their project first. Later, I gave them a suggestion that they should go to the book shop first, where they could not only buy the book, but also find some useful information, which might help the other better their project. Therefore, cooperation is better than conflict. Remember

64、that sometimes our goal is not that only we get something and the other gets nothing, but that all people get what they want. All in all, only good cooperation will benefit everyone. 【寫作指導(dǎo)】 考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者

65、句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。 【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文主題明確，夾敘夾議，在語(yǔ)言上用了一些常見的短語(yǔ)not only…but also不但…而且…，All in all,總的來(lái)說(shuō)。句式上也是富有變化：because the rope is too short to allow them to eat the food at the same time. 這句話用了too …to…結(jié)構(gòu)，One of them w

66、anted to go to the bookshop first, while the other wanted to finish their project first. 這句話用了while表示對(duì)比，Later, I gave them a suggestion that they should go to the book shop first, where they could not only buy the book, but also find some useful information, which might help the other better their project. 這句話用了同位語(yǔ)從句，非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。Remember that sometimes our goal is not that only we get something and the other gets nothing, but that all people get what they want.這句話用了not..but…結(jié)構(gòu)，和表語(yǔ)從句。 16