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1、（新課改）2022年高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí) Module 5 A Trip Along the Three Gorges學(xué)案（含解析）外研版必修4 Ⅰ.閱讀單詞——————知其意 1．cave n．　　　　　　　　　 洞；山洞 2．peak n. 山頂；山峰 3．plain n. 平原 4．plateau n. 高原 5．shore n．[縱聯(lián)1] (海、湖、河等的)岸 6．slope n. 斜坡 7．valley n．[縱聯(lián)2] 山谷 8．downstream adv. 向下游；隨波而下 9．temple n. 寺廟 10．dock n.

2、碼頭 vi. 駛?cè)氪a頭 11．raft n. 木筏 12．detour n. 迂路；繞行之路 13．legend n. 傳奇；傳說故事 14．deck n. 甲板 15．exploit vt. 開發(fā) 16．cruise n. (乘游輪的)漫游；巡航 17．cabin n. 船艙；機(jī)艙 18．lounge n. 休息室；休息廳 19．fertile adj. 肥沃的 Ⅱ.重點(diǎn)單詞——————寫其形 1．wood n. (常作復(fù)數(shù))樹林 2．flat adj. 平坦的 3．colleague n．[縱聯(lián)3] 同事

3、4．goods n. 貨物 5．trade vi. 做生意 6．narrow vi. 變狹窄；縮小 7．remote adj. 遙遠(yuǎn)的 8．steep adj. 陡峭的；險峻的 9．spot n. 地點(diǎn)；場所 10．view n. 景色；風(fēng)景 11．immense adj. 極大的 Ⅲ.拓展單詞——————通其變 1．surround vt.圍繞；環(huán)繞→surrounding adj.周圍的→surroundings n．環(huán)境；周圍的事物 2．distant adj.遙遠(yuǎn)的；冷淡的；疏遠(yuǎn)的→distance n．距離；遠(yuǎn)方 3．forbid

4、 vt.禁止→forbidden adj.被禁止的；不準(zhǔn)的 4．mountainous adj.多山的→mountain n．山；山脈 5．varied adj.多變化的→vary vi.變化；變更→various adj.各種各樣的→variety n．種類；多樣性 6．naturally adv.自然地→natural adj.自然的→nature n．自然；天性 縱聯(lián)1. “岸邊”來聚會 ①shore(海、湖、河等的)岸　 ②beach海灘 ③coast海岸 ④bank岸 ⑤seashore海岸；海濱 縱聯(lián)2.一“山”更比一“山”高 ①valley山谷 ②p

5、eak山頂；山峰 ③mountain山；山脈 ④hill小山 ⑤range山脈 縱聯(lián)3. “朋友圈”不斷擴(kuò)大 ①colleague同事 ②fellow同伴；伙伴 ③net-pal網(wǎng)友 ④roommate室友，舍友 ⑤panion同伴；同事；伴侶 ⑥partner伙伴；同伴 ⑦pen-pal筆友 ⑧friend朋友 單元話題——旅游 子話題1　旅行類型 ?、賘ourney n．(長途)旅行，行程 ②tour n．參觀，觀光，旅行 ③trip n．(短途)旅行，旅程 ④voyage n．航行，旅行 ⑤outing n．郊游，遠(yuǎn)足 ⑥sel

6、f-driving travel自駕游 子話題2　旅游景點(diǎn) ?、賒estination n．目的地，終點(diǎn) ②scenery n．風(fēng)景，景色，風(fēng)光 ③castle n．城堡 ④museum n．博物館，博物院 ⑤palace n．宮，宮殿 ⑥pyramid n．金字塔 ⑦aquarium n．水族館 ⑧fountain n．噴泉 ⑨monument n．紀(jì)念碑，紀(jì)念塔 ⑩a summer resort避暑勝地 ?a place of interest名勝 ?a must-see place必游之地 [學(xué)考對接·活學(xué)活用] 高考采擷(一)　閱讀中的詞匯應(yīng)用

7、 1．(2017·江蘇高考閱讀D) Elsewhere in Asia even more astonishing actions are being taken.Chewang Norphel lives in a 　?　 (mountain) region in India, where he is known as the Ice Man.The loss of glaciers (冰川) there due to global warming represents an enormous? threat to agriculture.Without the glaciers,

8、 water will arrive in the rivers at times when it can damage crops. ①用mountain的正確形式填空：mountainous ②寫出enormous在本單元中的近義詞：immense 2．(2011·北京高考閱讀D) As the railroads and the highways shaped the American West in the past centuries, a new electrical generating (發(fā)電) and transmission (輸送) system for the 2

9、1th century will leave a lasting mark on the West, for better or worse.Much of the real significance of railroads and highways is not in their direct physical effect on the scenery?， but in the ways that they affect the 　?　 (surround) munity.The same is true of big solar plants and the power lines

10、that will be laid down to move electricity around. ... So trade-offs will have to be made.Some scenic spots? will be sacrificed.Some species (物種) will be forced to move, or will be carefully moved to special acmodations.Deals will be struck to reduce the immediate effects. ①寫出scenery在本單元中的近義詞：vie

11、w ②用surround的正確形式填空：surrounding ③spot在句中意為：地點(diǎn)，場所；此外還可用作名詞，意為：斑點(diǎn)；污點(diǎn)；用作動詞意為：發(fā)現(xiàn)；認(rèn)出；弄臟 高考采擷(二)　寫作中的詞匯應(yīng)用 (根據(jù)漢語及提示詞翻譯句子) 1．(2018·江蘇高考書面表達(dá))但我得到的信息是豐富多樣的，甚至是矛盾的。(varied) But_the_information_I_got_was_rich_and_varied,_or_even_contradictory. 2．(2017·全國卷Ⅱ書面表達(dá))此外，還有一些著名的藝術(shù)家將會在現(xiàn)場表演如何剪紙。(spot) In_addition

12、,_there_are_famous_artists_who_will_perform_how_to_cut_paper_on_the_spot. 3．(2017·北京高考書面表達(dá))在我看來，我更喜歡長江之行，長江是中國最長的河流，也是中國文明發(fā)源地之一。(view) In_my_view/From_my_point_of_view,_I_prefer_the_tour_along_the_Yangtze_River,_the_longest_river_and_one_of_the_mother_rivers_of_Chinese_civilization. (二)課堂重點(diǎn)釋疑 1．

13、forbid vt.(forbad/forbade, forbidden, forbi-dding) 禁止；不準(zhǔn) [記牢] (1)forbid doing sth.　　　　　 禁止做某事 禁止某人做某事 (2)forbidden adj. 被禁止的；禁用的 [練通] 單句語法填空 ①He was forbidden to_leave (leave) the house, as a punishment. ②It is high time that we forbade setting (set) off fireworks in urban areas. ③He

14、forbade me from meeting my friends online at the Internet café！ 一句多譯 禁止孩子們過度玩手機(jī)是他們父母的責(zé)任。 ④It is their parents' duty to forbid_the_children_to_play mobile phones excessively. ⑤It is their parents' duty to forbid_the_children_from_playing mobile phones excessively. [用準(zhǔn)]　(1)forbid后不能直接跟動詞不定式作賓語，但

15、可直接跟動名詞作賓語，也可用forbid sb.to do sth.形式。 (2)與forbid用法類似的動詞還有：allow, advise, permit等。 [寫美]　翻譯句子 ⑥如果我們禁止使用塑料袋，我們應(yīng)該找到解決問題的方法。 If_we_forbid_using_plastic_bags,_we_should_find_ways_to_solve_the_problem. 2．spot n．地點(diǎn)；場所；斑點(diǎn)；污點(diǎn)v.發(fā)現(xiàn)；認(rèn)出；弄臟 [辨清]　寫出下列句中spot的含義 ①The floor was spotted with paint, which made hi

16、m embarrassed.弄臟 ②Some of the spots on your trousers are hard to remove.斑點(diǎn)；污點(diǎn) ③I read through the first page of the book and spotted a spelling mistake.發(fā)現(xiàn) ④Fortunately, a man made an offer to take him around the different spots.地點(diǎn)；場所 [記牢] (1)spot sb.doing sth.　　　 發(fā)現(xiàn)某人正在做某事 on the spot 在現(xiàn)場；當(dāng)場

17、；立即 in a spot 處于困境 (2)be spotted with 滿是……斑點(diǎn)；點(diǎn)綴著 [練通] 單句語法填空 ⑤Spotted shopping (shop) shoulder to shoulder with a girl, I felt very embarrassed. ⑥I wish our government could set up more free Wi-Fi spots where we can have access to the Internet on our phones. 補(bǔ)全句子 ⑦James was called to s

18、ee the producer and got the job on_the_spot. 詹姆斯被叫去見制片人，當(dāng)場就得到了那份工作。 [用準(zhǔn)]　spot作“地點(diǎn)”講，用作定語從句的先行詞時，從句如缺狀語則用where引導(dǎo)定語從句，從句如缺主語或賓語則用that/which引導(dǎo)定語從句。 [寫美]　翻譯句子 ⑧(2017·北京高考書面表達(dá))此外，長江沿岸的風(fēng)景也令人驚嘆，有許多著名的觀光景點(diǎn)。 Moreover,_the_scenery_along_the_Yangtze_River_is_amazing,_with_many_well-known_sightseeing_spots

19、. 3．view n．景色；風(fēng)景；觀點(diǎn)；見解；視野vt.把……視為……；觀看；注視；考慮 [辨清]　寫出下列句中view的含義 ①People came from all over the world to view her work.觀看 ②If we sit near the front of the bus, we'll have a better view.視野 ③He climbed up to the top of the church tower to get a better view of the entire city.景色 ④In this lecture,

20、I can only give you a purely personal view of how we can live life to the full.觀點(diǎn)；見解 [記牢] (1)e into view　　　　　　　 映入眼簾；進(jìn)入視野 in view 在視野范圍內(nèi) have a good view of 清楚地看到；飽覽 (2)in view of 鑒于；考慮到 in one's view＝from one's point of view 在某人看來 (3)view ...as ... 把……看作…… [練通]　單句語法填空 ⑤When the

21、 old man opened the window, a stranger with a high hat came into view. ⑥When the car was first made, the design was viewed as highly original. ⑦In view of the shortage of time, each person may only speak for five minutes. ⑧She waited until the whole island was in view and then took a photo. [寫美]

22、　翻譯句子 ⑨(2017·北京高考書面表達(dá))在泰山之巔，你可以飽覽美麗的日出。 On_the_top_of_Mountain_Tai,_you_can_have_a_good_view_of_the_beautiful_sunrise. [詞匯過關(guān)綜合訓(xùn)練]　 Ⅰ.單詞拼寫 1．Cheap goods (貨物) are available, but not in sufficient quantities to satisfy demand. 2．Hardly had she walked out of the woods (樹林) when she heard the stran

23、ge scream ing from behind a tree. 3．He was not only talented but also popular with his colleagues (同事)． 4．Having settled in that remote (遙遠(yuǎn)的) area for a year, the young man finally adapted to the weather. 5．It used to be thought that the Earth was flat (平坦的)． 6．The water was quite shallow but wh

24、ere the reef ended, there was a steep (陡峭的) drop to the sandy ocean floor. 7．Smoking is harmful to health.It should be forbidden (禁止)． 8．Developing foreign trade (貿(mào)易，交易) is very important for our country. Ⅱ.單句語法填空 1．The key is to develop a balanced and varied (vary) program that is fun as well a

25、s progressive. 2．The high-anxiety focus on reading score may have narrowed (narrow) students access to knowledge about the world that can improve their reading. 3．If you stand here, you'll get a better view of the river. 4．They trade with the local villagers to make a living. 5．We should take me

26、asures to forbid returning (return) illegal cooking oil to dinner tables. 6．When he returned home on a rainy day, his boots were_spotted (spot) with mud. 7．The travellers in the desert saw in the distance (distant) a lake and trees growing beside it, but they didn't exist actually. 8．Our class ar

27、e going to visit poor children in a remote mountainous (mountain) area this weekend. Ⅲ.根據(jù)提示補(bǔ)全句子 1．在我看來，為了增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)，我們應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成健康的飲食習(xí)慣。(view) In_my_view,_we should develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. 2．那個年輕人在搶一位女士的項(xiàng)鏈時被發(fā)現(xiàn)了，警察當(dāng)場逮捕了他。(spot) Caught robbing a lady of her necklace, the youn

28、g man was arrested on_the_spot by a policeman. 3．火車開動時，我們被禁止將頭伸出窗外。(forbid) We were_forbidden_to_stick_our_heads_out_of the window when the train was moving. 4．我住在一座古老的城鎮(zhèn)里，城鎮(zhèn)的四周都是美麗的樹林。(surround) I live in a very old town (that/which_is)_surrounded_by/with_beautiful_woods. 5．在現(xiàn)代，很多年輕人喜歡在網(wǎng)上與他人做生

29、意。(trade) In modern times, many youths like_trading_with_others on the Internet. (一)課前自主學(xué)習(xí) 1．a(chǎn)t_the_edge_of　　　　　　　 在……的邊緣 2．have_four_weeks_off 休四周假 3．a(chǎn)t_least 至少 4．go_through　　[串記1] 通過；經(jīng)歷；仔細(xì)檢查 5．be_heavy_with [串記2] 有大量的……；充滿 6．take_advantage_of 利用 7．in_the_distance 遠(yuǎn)處的 8

30、．rip_off 敲竹杠；敲詐 9．get_a_kick_out_of (俚語)從……中得到樂趣 10．a(chǎn)ll_the_way 一路；一直；自始至終 [同根短語串記] 串記1.“v.＋through”短語多棱鏡 ①go through經(jīng)歷；穿過 ②get through用完；耗盡 ③pull through康復(fù)；痊愈 ④see through看透；識破 ⑤break through沖破；突破 ⑥glance through匆匆看一遍 串記2.“充滿……”短語薈萃 ①be heavy with充滿 ②be filled with被……充滿 ③be

31、 full of充滿 ④fill up充滿；填滿 ⑤be crowded with充滿；擠滿 1．a(chǎn) teacher training college 教師進(jìn)修學(xué)院 2．the construction site 建設(shè)工地 3．the Spring Festival 春節(jié) 4．take a boat downstream 乘船順流而下 5．show one's passport 出示某人的護(hù)照 6．get on/off boat 上/下船 7．take pictures 拍照 8．make a prediction 預(yù)測 9．geog

32、raphical features 地理特征 10．follow the rules 遵循這些規(guī)則 1．He and a colleague were_to_spend two years there teaching English at a teacher training college. 他和一位同事將在那里的一所教師進(jìn)修學(xué)院教兩年英語。 2．Nearly 100 million people live here, most_of_them_in_the_east. 有將近一億人口住在這兒，這些人大多數(shù)住在東部。 3．I'm allowed to stick o

33、ne in only_if I've been in a place for more than 24 hours. 只有當(dāng)我待在一個地方超過24小時，我才允許自己扎一個別針在地圖上。 [學(xué)考對接·活學(xué)活用] 高考采擷(一)　完形中的短語(補(bǔ)全句子) 1．(2017·全國卷Ⅰ完形填空) I myself went_through (經(jīng)歷) this searching process and found something that has changed my experience at college for the better: I discovered ASL — Ameri

34、can Sign Language (美式手語)． 2．(2015·天津高考完形填空) Although her description sounded wonderful, the price was beyond our range, so we declined.But she kept urging us to have a look at_least (至少)． 高考采擷(二)　寫作中的短語和句式(補(bǔ)全句子/詞匯升級) 1．(2018·北京高考書面表達(dá))在我看來，你一定會從中國文化中得到樂趣。 In my opinion, you will certainly get_a_k

35、ick_out_of Chinese culture. 2．(2017·浙江高考寫作)很快，狼跑開了，消失在遠(yuǎn)處。 Soon, the wolf ran away off the road and disappeared in_the_distance. 3．(2016·江蘇高考書面表達(dá)) Thirdly, the voters or even the petitors in many cases are possibly made use of by the organizers for mercial purposes.(用本單元短語替換加黑詞)taken_advantage_of

36、 4．(2014·湖北高考寫作)通過我多年的學(xué)校生活，我明白了如果我們要想改變生活，從小事做起是至關(guān)重要的。(be to do sth.) Through my years of school life, I've learned that if we are_to_make_a_difference in life, it's vital that we should begin with small things. (二)課堂重點(diǎn)釋疑 [短語集釋] 1．go through通過(考試、法案等)；經(jīng)過(某場所)；經(jīng)歷；詳細(xì)檢查；查看；完成；用完；耗盡 [辨清]　寫出下列句中g(shù)o t

37、hrough的含義 ①I had to go through a lot of difficulties to bee strong enough to solve it.經(jīng)歷 ②Our plan on how to spend our summer holidays didn't go through.通過 ③As you go through this book, you will find that each of the millions of people who lived through World War Ⅱ had a different experience.完成

38、④He went through his pockets looking for the keys.詳細(xì)檢查；查看 [記牢] go after　　　　　　　 追求；追逐 go by 過去；流逝 go on (with) 發(fā)生；繼續(xù)下去 go against 不利于；違背；反對 go up 上升；增長；升起 go over 復(fù)習(xí)；重溫；仔細(xì)檢查 go out 熄滅；過時；出去 [練通]　選用上述短語填空 ⑤I was reading magazines in the room when all of a sudden the light went_ou

39、t. ⑥Being a winner doesn't mean you'll always get everything you want, but it does mean you'll go_after your goals in ways that are reliable. ⑦Our teacher chose many important exercises for us, and I went_over the language points at the same time. [寫美]　翻譯句子 ⑧無論我們經(jīng)歷了多少困難，如果我們不放棄，我們就能克服它們。 No_mat

40、ter_how_many_difficulties_we_might_go_through,_we_can_overe_them_if_we_don't_give_up. 2．get a kick out of (俚語)從……中得到樂趣 [記牢] (1)for kicks　　　　　　 為了追求刺激 (2)kick against 抱怨；反對 kick off (足球)開賽/球；脫掉；開始 kick away 不斷地踢；踢開 kick out 攆走；開除 kick the habit of 戒除……的習(xí)慣 [練通]　選用上述短語填空 ①I don't ex

41、pect to win when I bet — I do it for_kicks. ②I can't believe that Glen's wife kicked him out. ③As the job-hunting season kicks_off,_many graduates are suffering from anxiety. ④My brother gets_a_kick_out_of collecting coins and he has got a very large collection. [寫美]　補(bǔ)全句子 ⑤這項(xiàng)旨在幫助人們戒掉吸煙習(xí)慣的協(xié)議是在兩年

42、前簽署的。 The agreement, intended_to_help_people_kick_the_habit_of_smoking,_was signed two years ago. [句式集釋] be to do sth. [教材原句]　He and a colleague were_to_spend two years there teaching English at a teacher training college. [悟拓展例句] (1)You are_to_arrive_at_the_spot before five this afternoon. 你

43、們將要在今天下午五點(diǎn)鐘以前到達(dá)現(xiàn)場。 (2)All the drivers are_to_follow the traffic regulations. 所有的司機(jī)必須遵守交通規(guī)則。 (3)The invention of the Internet is_to_change_the_way we municate with each other. 互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)明注定要改變我們相互交流的方式。 (4)Colin was_about_to get off the camel when a child ran towards him. 科林正要從駱駝上下來， 這時一個小孩向他跑來。 (5

44、)So if you are_going_to_visit a friend, it is necessary to make a reservation. 所以，如果你要去拜訪一個朋友，有必要預(yù)約一下。 [析用法規(guī)則] 用法歸納 (1)be to do sth.表示“按照計(jì)劃或安排將要做某事”。 (2)be to do sth.意為“應(yīng)該/必須做某事”。長輩要求晚輩或上級要求下級做某事時常用此句型。 (3)be to do sth.表示不可避免將要發(fā)生的事或命中注定的事。 (4)be about to do ...表示“即將發(fā)生的動作”。 (5)be going to d

45、o ...多用于口語，強(qiáng)調(diào)事先打算、計(jì)劃要做某事或根據(jù)某種跡象要發(fā)生某事。 注意事項(xiàng) be about to do ...表示“即將發(fā)生的動作”，不與表示時間的副詞或其他時間狀語連用，常用于be about to do ...when ...，意為“正要做……這時……”。 [背寫作佳句] (1)We were to have visited the Great Wall yesterday, but it rained.(要點(diǎn)句) (2)We were about to leave when an old man asked us which school we were in.(要

46、點(diǎn)句) [詞塊、句式過關(guān)綜合訓(xùn)練]　 Ⅰ.選詞填空 rip off， take advantage of， be heavy with， at the edge of， go through， at least， get a kick out of， all the way 1．Learning is a difficult task, but we can get_a_kick_out_of it. 2．Even if you can't help him, at_least you can give him encouragement. 3．How does she keep

47、smiling after all the hardships she has gone_through? 4．The New Year is ing.The air is_heavy_with joy and smell of fireworks. 5．Some seafood restaurants near the seaside make illegal money by ripping_off tourists. 6．Now, on the special night, I stayed in the shadows at_the_edge_of the crowd waiti

48、ng for the winning ticket to be drawn. 7．Judging things from as many sides as possible is a skill that needs improving all_the_way. 8．Don't limit yourself to your college alone — take_advantage_of all available resources. Ⅱ.根據(jù)提示補(bǔ)全句子/句型轉(zhuǎn)換 1．當(dāng)格林先生年邁時，他從飯后散步中得到了很多樂趣。(get a kick out of) Mr Green go

49、t_a_kick_out_of_going_for_a_walk_after_dinner when he was old. 2．以你自己的速度學(xué)習(xí)和寫作——你不必匆忙——因?yàn)槟阌幸荒甑臅r間來完成這個項(xiàng)目。(go through) Study and write at your own pace — you do not have to rush — as you have a year to go_through_the_project. 3．很多專家參加了這次會議，其中大多數(shù)來自美國。(獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)) Many experts attended the conference, mo

50、st_of_them_from_the_United_States. 4．All guests must check out by 9：30 am on the day of their departure. →All guests are_to_check_out by 9：30 am on the day of their departure.(be to do sth.) 5．You can be allowed to go on holiday with your friends only if you have passed the examination. →Only_if

51、_you_have_passed_the_examination_can_you_be_allowed to go on holiday with your friends.(倒裝句式) Ⅲ.讀后續(xù)寫 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。 From hanging out with friends in the nearby coffee shop to daydreaming of “making it big” as a rock star, the last few years has been a roller-coaster ride. I am tor

52、mented (折磨)with questions such as who I am and what I am doing here. During the last year at school, I took up the challenging task of directing the_English_play for the Annual Inter House Dramatics petition. The task was said to be very long and tiring but equally rewarding. After several discussi

53、ons with my vice-captain and my_English_teacher,_the play was selected and the cast was confirmed. I thought of “perfect ideas” such as the “perfect delivery of certain dialogues” and the “perfect effects”． I discussed my ideas with my crew and vice-captain. Everybody seemed pleased with thoughts a

54、nd also suggested a few. I took these into careful consideration and made sure that my crew's suggestions were included. But little did I know that my “perfect_plan” was not perfect according to my English teacher who was in charge of my house. Even though it was supposed to be a pletely student-b

55、ased activity, my English teacher poked her nose into the production. All of us wanted to win and this was made very clear by my English teacher. She changed our entire plan into something we could not understand. There was a lot of confusion among the actors and the crew. I was torn between listen

56、ing to the plaints of the fellow students and obeying my teacher. But soon I realized that the way we were practicing would lead us nowhere. So, the next morning, I gathered all my courage,_practiced what I was going to say to her and finally made the journey of my life to the_staff_room. I discuss

57、ed with my teacher about the confusion being caused, the unsatisfied actors and how her interference (干預(yù)) was causing frustration. 注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2．至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語； 3．續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好； 4．續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 Paragraph 1： As I waited for my teacher to reply, I prepared myself

58、for the blow.　 Paragraph 2： Though we came second in the English play petition, I realized I had got more out of the whole

59、 experience than I had hoped for.　 [寫作步驟] 第一步：速讀全文 文本大意：本文是記敘文，講述了我在一次英語戲劇表演賽前，面對老師的干預(yù)學(xué)會解決問題終

60、獲成功的故事。 敘述意圖：文章告訴我們做事要有自己的主見。 第二步：細(xì)讀全文 1．所給短文情景模式分析。 who I, my English teacher, crew what I took up the challenging task of directing the English play. when during the last year where at school why My English teacher poked her nose into the production. 2．對原文所提供的下劃線詞語進(jìn)行分類。 ★人物：my Eng

61、lish teacher, crew ★事件：the English play, perfect plan, the staff room ★動作與心理描寫：daydream, pleased, realize, confusion, courage 第三步：精心謀篇 1．Paragraph 1：As I waited for my teacher to reply, I prepared myself for the blow. 當(dāng)我在等待老師的回答時，我準(zhǔn)備接受老師對我的打擊。 [情節(jié)分析]　由段首句中的關(guān)鍵詞waited for, reply, prepared可知，接下來應(yīng)

62、該是圍繞我的老師的反應(yīng)來寫。 2．Paragraph 2: Though we came second in the English play petition, I realized I had got more out of the whole experience than I had hoped for. 盡管我們在這次英語戲劇比賽中得了第二名，但我意識到我從這次經(jīng)歷中獲得的東西超出了我原來希望的。 [情節(jié)分析]　由轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系詞“Though”可知，此段重點(diǎn)在后半句內(nèi)容上，即我的收獲。因此，接下來的內(nèi)容就是具體描寫作者在整個經(jīng)歷中的收獲。 第四步：初寫成文 Paragraph

63、1： 1．她只是微笑著說我做得很好，引起了她對這件事的關(guān)注。 She just smiled and said that I had done a good thing that brought this to her attention. 2．晚上，她召開了一個會議，告訴大家繼續(xù)之前的計(jì)劃，并說這是一個以學(xué)生為基礎(chǔ)的作品。 In the evening she called a meeting and told the crew to_continue_with_previous_plans and said that it was a student-based productio

64、n. 3．當(dāng)她離開時，她告訴我們說我們的“完美計(jì)劃”應(yīng)該讓我們贏得第一名。 As she left she told us that our “perfect_plan” should make us win_first_place. Paragraph 2： 4．我意識到我有勇氣面對問題。 I realized I had_the_courage_to_face problems. 5．作為團(tuán)隊(duì)工作者，我有抗壓能力。 I could work under_pressure as a team worker. 6．現(xiàn)在我仍然去拜訪我的英語老師，而且每次見到她，她的臉都會讓我想

65、起那次去教師辦公室的可怕的路程。 Now I still visit my English teacher and each time I see her, her face reminds_me_of that terrifying walk to the staff room. 第五步：潤色升級 1．用分詞短語作定語改寫要點(diǎn)1。 She_just_smiled_and_said_that_I_had_done_a_good_thing_bringing_this_to_her_attention. 2．將要點(diǎn)4和要點(diǎn)5合并為一個并列句。 I_realized_I_had_the

66、_courage_to_face_problems_and_I_could_work_under_pressure_as_a_team_worker. 3．把要點(diǎn)6中的visit改為名詞形式。 visit→pay_a_visit_to 第六步：復(fù)查定稿 Paragraph 1： As I waited for my teacher to reply, I prepared myself for the blow. But she just smiled and said that I had done a good thing bringing this to her attention. In the evening she called a meeting and told the crew to continue with previous plans and said that it was a student-based production. As she left she told us that our “perfect_plan” should make u