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1、單元同步作文指導Unit 9What does he look like?本單元以“外貌”為話題,重點學習了如何來詢問人物的外貌及如何回答來描述人物的外貌。具體到書面表達中,要求同學們會根據(jù)題目要求來描述一個人。所以首先要記住描述外貌的基本句型,如描述人物身高、胖瘦、身材、發(fā)型、面部特征等的句型;其次在寫作中有時也可以根據(jù)需要描寫他/她的穿著特點、愛好、與別人的不同之處等。教材中出現(xiàn)的常用句型:Hes (really) tall/ short.他(真的)很高/矮。Hes heavy/ thin.他很重/瘦。He is of medium height.他中等個子。He has long/ sh
2、ort straight/ curly black/ blonde hair.他有一頭黑色的/金黃色的長/短/直/卷發(fā)。He has a big nose/ a small mouth/ a round face/ a long face/ big eyes.他有一個大鼻子/一張小嘴巴/一張圓臉/一張長臉/一雙大眼睛。拓展常用句型:He wears glasses.他戴著眼鏡。He often wears white clothes.他經(jīng)常穿白色的衣服。He likes playing basketball.他喜歡打籃球。He is funny and always makes people
3、happy.他很風趣,總是使人們高興。經(jīng)典范文展示 假如你是Lucy,在Linda的生日聚會上,你認識了她的表哥Simon。這個美國男孩高個子,留著黑色的短發(fā),戴著眼鏡,說話風趣幽默。你想給筆友Anna介紹一下Simon,請根據(jù)Simon的情況給Anna寫一封信。要求:不少于60詞。Dear Anna,Hows it going?Do you want to know Simon?He is my friend Lindas cousin.He is from the United States.This year he is fourteen years old.He is a tall b
4、oy.He has short black hair and he wears glasses.Simon is very funny.He always makes people happy.Oh,I like this American boy very much.Do you want to be his friend?Yours,Lucy【點撥】:1.這是一篇介紹人物的應用文,寫作的時候要注意信件的格式。2.描述人物可從外貌和性格特征等方面入手,可通過使用be動詞、實義動詞have等用不同的句式進行表達,豐富文章的句式結(jié)構,避免句式方面的單調(diào)乏味。3.寫作中首先要確保題目中的要點無遺漏
5、,此外可根據(jù)文字提示合理發(fā)揮,豐富文章內(nèi)容。4.結(jié)尾時使用一般疑問句或反意疑問句,可使人產(chǎn)生親切感,是一種不錯的結(jié)尾方式。熱點作文練習 友誼是人生不可缺少的一部分,你有好朋友嗎?現(xiàn)在請你寫一篇英語短文(不少于60詞)來描述你的好朋友,內(nèi)容包括姓名、年齡、職業(yè)、外貌及愛好等。One possible version:My best friend is Li Ming.He is 15 years old.He is a student at PEP Middle School.He is tall and thin.He has a small nose and two small eyes.A
6、nd he has short curly black hair.He often wears jeans,a Tshirt and sports shoes.He studies very hard.And his favorite subject is English.I like him because he always helps other students (to) learn English,and he is good at soccer.單元常見錯誤診斷 病號1:He has a_curly_hair【處方】hair意為“頭發(fā)”,是不可數(shù)名詞,其前不能加“a”。故原句中冠詞
7、a應去掉。病號2:Is he tall or short?Yes,he_is_tall【處方】上面問句是個選擇疑問句,回答時必須選擇備選項之一作答,不能用Yes或No作答。故原句應以He is tall./He is short.作答。病號3:He has curly_brown_short hair.【處方】在英語中當一個名詞被多個形容詞修飾時,應注意形容詞的先后位置。在描述人物頭發(fā)時,先長短,再卷直,然后是顏色,故上句應改為:He has short curly brown hair.病號4:My friend Nancy has_of_medium_height【處方】of medium height意為“中等身高”,為介詞短語,應位于系動詞之后作表語。故原句中has應改為is。