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1、 第五講　書(shū)信體作文——普通書(shū)信&電子郵件 A 典型例題 　　(2018·全國(guó)卷Ⅲ)假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Peter來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你校學(xué)生體育運(yùn)動(dòng)情況。請(qǐng)給他回信，內(nèi)容包括： 1.學(xué)校的體育場(chǎng)館； 2.主要的運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目； 3.你喜歡的項(xiàng)目。 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 審題謀篇 學(xué)生習(xí)作 Dear Peter， I'm ①very glad to hear from you.You asked me about the physical exercise in our school in your last letter.

2、The following are relevant details. ②A new stadium has been built.③It has become the new landmark in our school.④As the stadium was set up，⑤many sports are able to be held.⑥It makes ping-pong，football as well as running competition enjoy great popularity.My favourite sport is playing basketball.⑦It

3、 is because it has been giving me strength to face the challenges in my life. ⑧I hope you will come to our school and experience it in the near future. Yours， Li Hua 升級(jí)方案 1.升級(jí)詞匯①：more_than delighted 2.在句②前加過(guò)渡詞“首先”：To_start/begin with 3.句②③合并升級(jí)為定語(yǔ)從句： To_start_with，a_new_stadium_has_been_built

4、，which_has_become_the_new_landmark_in_our_school. 4.升級(jí)詞匯⑤：a_wide_range of 5.句④⑤⑥升級(jí)為with結(jié)構(gòu)，v.-ing作狀語(yǔ)： With_the_stadium_set_up，a_wide_range_of_sports_are_able_to_be_held，making_ping-pong，football_as_well_as_running_competition_enjoy_great_popularity. 6.句⑦升級(jí)句式： The_reason_is_that_it_has_been_givin

5、g_me_strength_to_face_the_challenges_in_my_life. 7.在句⑧前增添過(guò)渡語(yǔ)：All_in_all/In_conclusion 滿分作文 Dear Peter， I'm more than delighted to hear from you.You asked me about the physical exercise in our school in your last letter.The following are relevant details. To begin with，a new stadium has been bui

6、lt，which has become the new landmark in our school.With the stadium set up，a wide range of sports are able to be held，making ping-pong，football as well as running competition enjoy great popularity.My favourite sport is playing basketball.The reason is that it has been giving me strength to face the

7、 challenges in my life. All in all，I do hope you will come to our school and experience it in the near future. Yours， Li Hua B 典型例題 　　(2017·全國(guó)卷Ⅰ)假定你是李華，正在教你的英國(guó)朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)封郵件告知下次上課的計(jì)劃。內(nèi)容包括： (1)時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)； (2)內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)唐詩(shī)； (3)課前準(zhǔn)備：簡(jiǎn)要了解唐朝的歷史。 注意： 1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 審題謀篇 學(xué)生習(xí)作 Dear

8、 Leslie， ①I am writing to tell you my plan for the coming Chinese lesson. ②I've decided to teach you Tang poetry in Room 101 Building 1 on Wednesday，which will last two hours.③Tang poetry is a symbol of Chinese traditional literature，and plays an important part in Chinese culture，so it's necessary

9、 for you to master it. ④Besides，in order to learn Tang poetry well，you'd better get some information about Tang Dynasty before class. ⑤Please tell me if it's convenient for you.⑥Furthermore，when you meet with some puzzling questions，don't hesitate to turn to me. Yours， Li Hua 升級(jí)方案 1.在句②中使用短語(yǔ)替換

10、動(dòng)詞decided： made_up_my_mind 2.在句②中加入具體的時(shí)間早上8點(diǎn)： at_8_a．m. 3.在句③中使用非謂語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)替換and plays an important part in Chinese culture： playing_an_important_part_in_Chinese_culture 4.在句③中使用抽象名詞具體化替換necessary： a_necessity 5.在句③中使用短語(yǔ)替換master： have_a_good_knowledge_of 6.句⑤改為問(wèn)句，體現(xiàn)交際性： Would_you_tell_me_if_it'

11、s_convenient_for_you？ 滿分作文 Dear Leslie， I am writing to tell you my plan for the coming Chinese lesson. I've made up my mind to teach you Tang poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 a．m.on Wednesday，which will last two hours.Tang poetry is a symbol of Chinese traditional literature，playing an import

12、ant part in Chinese culture，so it's a necessity for you to have a good knowledge of it.Besides，in order to learn Tang poetry well，you'd better get some information about Tang Dynasty before class. Would you tell me if it's convenient for you？Furthermore，when you meet with some puzzling questions，do

13、n't hesitate to turn to me. Yours， Li Hua 一、書(shū)信體作文的寫(xiě)作技巧 書(shū)信郵件類作文一般是以提綱式作文的形式出現(xiàn)并進(jìn)行考查。命題人往往通過(guò)給定寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，或者較為寬泛的要求，讓考生緊緊圍繞中心進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。寫(xiě)作技巧有： 1．認(rèn)真審題，確定“基調(diào)” 通過(guò)題目所給的文字信息，加以適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)，確定文章的主題，表述要點(diǎn)、文體、時(shí)態(tài)及人稱等。 2．列出提綱，明確主題 首先弄清題目與提綱之間的關(guān)系。提綱只是對(duì)文章的提示和概括，但不是主題句。需要根據(jù)提綱的性質(zhì)，寫(xiě)出完整的、體現(xiàn)主旨的句子，使之成為主題句。 3．圍繞主題，細(xì)化擴(kuò)展 要使整篇習(xí)作內(nèi)容充實(shí)

14、，言之有理，且層次感強(qiáng)，考生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中必須緊緊圍繞主題展開(kāi)具體敘述，且要注意句與句、段與段之間的連貫性。 4．有始有終，虎頭豹尾 一篇優(yōu)秀的習(xí)作，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾部分尤為重要。習(xí)作之始，必須能夠吸引讀者的眼球，讓其有強(qiáng)烈的愿望讀下去；收尾之處要有力度，切勿拖泥帶水，要既能體現(xiàn)作者的總結(jié)(或愿望、態(tài)度等)，又能發(fā)人深思。 二、書(shū)信體作文常用詞匯及句型 (一)常用詞匯/短語(yǔ) 1．interview vt.采訪 2．pursue vt.追求 3．a(chǎn)chievement n. 成就 4．progress n．進(jìn)步 5．successful adj.成功的 6．disappoint vt

15、.使失望 7．realize vt.實(shí)現(xiàn)；意識(shí)到 8．dream n．夢(mèng)想 9．desire vt.渴望 10．determined adj.有決心的 11．exploration n．探究 12．effort n．努力；成就 13．praise vt.表?yè)P(yáng) 14．pleasure n．愉快，快樂(lè) 15．hard-working adj.勤奮的 16．confidence n．自信 17．rapid adj.快速的 18．beneficial adj.有益的 19．a(chǎn)nnounce vt.宣布 20．gain vt.獲得；得到 21．inspire vt.激發(fā)；鼓

16、舞 22．encouragement n．鼓勵(lì) 23．a(chǎn)ppreciate vt.感激 24．honor n．榮譽(yù) 25．imagine vt.設(shè)想 26．satisfied adj.滿意的 27．concentrate v．集中 28．focus v．集中 29．a(chǎn)ttentively adv.聚精會(huì)神地 30．challenge n．挑戰(zhàn) 31．harmful adj.有害的 32．preparation n．準(zhǔn)備 33．experience vt.經(jīng)歷 34．manage v．處理，應(yīng)付 35．make great efforts竭盡全力 36．focus

17、one's attention on把注意力放在…… 37．bury oneself in集中精力于…… 38．a(chǎn)chieve one's goal/dream實(shí)現(xiàn)某人的目標(biāo)/夢(mèng)想 39．sing high praise for高度評(píng)價(jià) 40．gain great confidence獲得巨大的信心 41．make rapid progress取得巨大的進(jìn)步 42．but for要不是…… 43．come across遇到 44．pursue one's dream追求某人的夢(mèng)想 45．be crazy about對(duì)……癡迷 46．give up放棄 47．dream o

18、f夢(mèng)想 48．come true變成現(xiàn)實(shí) 49．manage to do做成某事 50．keep a positive attitude towards對(duì)……保持樂(lè)觀態(tài)度 (二)常用句型 Ⅰ.精彩開(kāi)頭 開(kāi)頭一般來(lái)說(shuō)要做到開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，使讀者了解要談什么，最好能立刻吸引讀者的興趣。 ①I'm writing to invite you to see the Chinese papercutting exhibition. 我寫(xiě)信邀請(qǐng)你來(lái)看中國(guó)剪紙藝術(shù)展。 ②I am writing to tell you some good news. 我寫(xiě)信告訴你一些好消息。 ③(2019

19、·福建質(zhì)檢·書(shū)面表達(dá))I'm delighted to know that you are interested in the Chinese speech contest，which is intended for foreigners. 我很高興知道…… ④(2019·濟(jì)南高考模擬·書(shū)面表達(dá))I'm Li Hua，an exchange student from China visiting your school now. 我是李華，來(lái)自……的一名交換生。 Ⅱ.正文佳句 銜接與過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)的使用是正文語(yǔ)言連貫性得以實(shí)現(xiàn)的最常用手段。在句與句之間，段與段之間恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍┏猩蠁⑾碌?/p>

20、連接(過(guò)渡)性詞語(yǔ)是非常必要的。 歸納如下： 1．表示起始關(guān)系的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ) ①(2018·全國(guó)卷Ⅰ·書(shū)面表達(dá))Generally speaking，your arrival shouldn't be later than the fixed time. 一般來(lái)說(shuō)，你在約定的時(shí)間之前早到。 ②Now I'll tell you the next learning programme. 現(xiàn)在我來(lái)告訴你下一個(gè)學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃。 2．表示時(shí)間順序的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ) ①(2018·北京卷·書(shū)面表達(dá))Then I showed them how to make tea. 然后我教他們?nèi)绾纹悴琛?/p>

21、 ②(2018·天津卷書(shū)面表達(dá))Meanwhile，attached to this email is a training plan I have worked out for my team. 同時(shí)，附上這封電子郵件是我為我的團(tuán)隊(duì)制定的訓(xùn)練計(jì)劃。 3．表示并列關(guān)系的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ) ①(2018·浙江卷·書(shū)面表達(dá))And I treasure this as a good chance to broaden my perspective as well as improve my spoken English. 我珍惜這一個(gè)開(kāi)闊了我的視野以及提高我的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)的好機(jī)會(huì)。 ②As y

22、ou know，playing pingpong can not only build up your body but also shape your character. 正如你所知道的，打兵乓球不僅可以增強(qiáng)你的體質(zhì)，還能塑造你的性格。 4．表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ) (2017·浙江卷·書(shū)面表達(dá))However，they still approached to the wolf bravely. 然而，他們?nèi)匀挥赂业亟咏恰? 5．表示因果關(guān)系的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ) ①(2018·北京卷·書(shū)面表達(dá))Since you have long been interested in Ch

23、inese culture，I think Beijing Language and Culture University is an ideal place for you. 既然你很早就對(duì)中國(guó)文化感興趣，我認(rèn)為北京語(yǔ)言大學(xué)對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)是一個(gè)理想的地方。 ②(2018·天津卷·書(shū)面表達(dá))Therefore，it can't be better if you can join my team and show your talent. 因此，如果你能加入我的團(tuán)隊(duì)來(lái)展示你的才能那就更好了。 6．表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ) ①(2018·全國(guó)卷Ⅲ·書(shū)面表達(dá))Besides，our scho

24、ol set up a volleyball team and a basketball team. 此外，我們學(xué)校還成立了排球隊(duì)和籃球隊(duì)。 ②(2018·全國(guó)卷Ⅲ·書(shū)面表達(dá))What's more，the stadium opens from 9 am to 5 pm Monday to Friday. 另外，體育場(chǎng)從星期一到星期五的上午9點(diǎn)到下午5點(diǎn)開(kāi)放。 7．表示列舉事實(shí)的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ) ①(2018·全國(guó)卷Ⅰ·書(shū)面表達(dá))You'd better bring some little gifts，such as a special food or drink from your

25、country. 你最好帶些小禮物，比如來(lái)自貴國(guó)的特殊食物或飲料。 ②(2018·江蘇卷·書(shū)面表達(dá))For example，there are huge amounts of reference books which I am confused to choose from. 例如，有如此多的參考書(shū)以至于我很困惑，不知如何選擇。 8．表示觀點(diǎn)的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ) ①(2018·全國(guó)卷Ⅲ·書(shū)面表達(dá))As for the physical exercise in our school，here is something about it. 這里有一些事情是關(guān)于我們學(xué)校的體育運(yùn)動(dòng)情況。

26、②(2017·北京卷·書(shū)面表達(dá))Personally，I prefer the tour along the Yangtze，the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. 就個(gè)人而言，我更喜歡沿著長(zhǎng)江，最長(zhǎng)的河流和中國(guó)文明的母親河之一旅游。 9．表示總結(jié)的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ) ①(2018·全國(guó)卷Ⅲ·書(shū)面表達(dá))All in all，I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself. 總而言之，我誠(chéng)摯地邀請(qǐng)你到我們學(xué)

27、校來(lái)親自看看。 ②In short，internet voting，to some extent，is unfair，if not immoral，and cannot be trusted. 總之，即使符合道德標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，網(wǎng)上投票在一定程度上也是不公平的，不應(yīng)該被相信。 Ⅲ.余味結(jié)尾 結(jié)尾有概括全文內(nèi)容，進(jìn)一步強(qiáng)調(diào)中心思想，升華主題的作用。主要有以下寫(xiě)法： 1．表示感謝法 ①I'll appreciate it if you can reply to my letter at your earliest convenience. 如果您盡早給我回信，我會(huì)非常感謝。 ②I'd appreciate it if you could do me a favor. 如果你能幫助我，我將非常感謝。 ③I must thank you again for your generous help. 我必須對(duì)你慷慨的幫助再次表示感謝。 2．表示期待法 ①Hope you'll have a good time in China. 希望你在中國(guó)玩得快樂(lè)。 ②Looking forward to your reply. 期待著您的回復(fù)。 ③I hope we'll get together again next year. 希望明年再聚。