《新高考英語(yǔ)二輪教師用書：第四板塊 第一部分 第2講 增加細(xì)節(jié)的5大高分技巧 Word版含解析》由會(huì)員分享，可在線閱讀，更多相關(guān)《新高考英語(yǔ)二輪教師用書：第四板塊 第一部分 第2講 增加細(xì)節(jié)的5大高分技巧 Word版含解析（8頁(yè)珍藏版）》請(qǐng)?jiān)谘b配圖網(wǎng)上搜索。

1、 第二講　增加細(xì)節(jié)的5大高分技巧 在應(yīng)用文寫作中，增加細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容的描述是必不可少的。在信息提綱類寫作中，考生一定不能簡(jiǎn)單地翻譯或者僅僅完成所給條目的指定內(nèi)容；在看圖作文中更不能只是輕描淡寫圖片內(nèi)容，否則很有可能造成內(nèi)容不充實(shí)、詞數(shù)要求不達(dá)標(biāo)或者結(jié)構(gòu)不連貫等問題。適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，能夠使習(xí)作流暢、豐滿，達(dá)到應(yīng)有的表達(dá)效果。 　　　列舉具體的實(shí)例進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充說明 (2019·浙江卷6月·應(yīng)用文寫作)我仍舊記得…… 1．I still remember... →I still remember what you have devoted to improving my oral Eng

2、lish and English writing. 2．(2018·浙江卷11月·應(yīng)用文寫作)這是一個(gè)黑色的皮革錢包。 It is a black leather wallet. →It is a black leather wallet with my ID card,2 credit cards and around 200 dollars in it. 3．(2020·寧波綜合檢測(cè)·應(yīng)用文寫作)我想大體上介紹一下中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)文化。 I'd like to talk briefly about Chinese traditional culture. →I'd like to t

3、alk briefly about Chinese traditional culture，especially Chinese painting. 4．(2020·臺(tái)州市第一次質(zhì)量預(yù)測(cè)·應(yīng)用文寫作)現(xiàn)在，我想與你分享春節(jié)的一些傳統(tǒng)風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣。 Now，I'd like to share with you some traditional customs of the Spring Festival. →Now，I'd like to share with you some traditional customs of the Spring Festival，the most import

4、ant festival in China. 5．我想找一個(gè)像我一樣喜歡旅行的筆友。 I'd like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me. →I'd like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me.If possible，we can travel together or share traveling experiences. 6．我是一個(gè)充滿活力的健康男孩，我非常喜歡體育運(yùn)動(dòng)。 I am a healthy

5、 boy full of energy so I like sports very much. →I am a healthy boy full of energy so I like sports very much，especially outdoor activities.Whenever I have time，I'll go hiking or mountain climbing with my classmates. 7．我要花一些時(shí)間和父母在一起。 I'll spend some time staying with my parents. →I'll spend some

6、 time staying with my parents，chatting with them and doing some housework. [題組過關(guān)1]——根據(jù)括號(hào)內(nèi)提示完成句子 1．The Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.__________________________(我們不僅能閱讀國(guó)內(nèi)外的新聞)，but also get information，send emails and attend online schools. 2．Laura is a standar

7、d American style.__________________________(她說一口完美的美式英語(yǔ))，and that's why I am crazy about her. 3．However，it seems people are unaware of the negative effects of mobile phones on communication. ________________________________________________________________________ (比如，很多人越來越不重視面對(duì)面的交流)． 4．However，

8、every coin has two sides，so does the Internet. ________________________________________________________________________ (比如，沉溺于網(wǎng)絡(luò)也許會(huì)影響我們的學(xué)習(xí)和工作)． 答案：1.We can not only read news from home and abroad 2．She speaks perfect American English 3．For example，many people begin to pay less attention to fac

9、e-to-face communication 4．For example，being lost in the Internet may affect our study and work 　　　　　增添與所寫信息相關(guān)的神態(tài)、動(dòng)作、 結(jié)果、心理描寫以及背景渲染等內(nèi)容 (2019·北京卷·書面表達(dá))在農(nóng)場(chǎng)里，我們幫忙摘西瓜。 On the farm，we helped pick watermelons. →On the farm，we helped pick watermelons.While working I realised how hard it was to work i

10、n the fields under a hot sun. 1．(2020·麗水市檢測(cè)·應(yīng)用文寫作)當(dāng)我們爬山時(shí)所有人都撿垃圾。 All of us picked up the rubbish as we climbed up. →All of us picked up the rubbish as we climbed up，helping to beautify the scenery.(結(jié)果描寫) 2．我有時(shí)去村西的小河游泳。 I went swimming in the river of the west of the village now and then. →I we

11、nt swimming in the river of the west of the village now and then.The water in the river is very clear.(背景渲染) →Weather permitting，I went swimming in the river of the west of the village now and then.(相關(guān)背景) 3．旅行了一周后，他回到了家。 After a week's trip，he returned home. →After a week's trip，he returned home

12、，tired but very happy.(心理描寫) [題組過關(guān)2]——根據(jù)括號(hào)內(nèi)提示完成句子 1．________________(考慮到這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)很有意義)，we intend to design a uniform suited to our own class. 2．I'll try my best to make your uncle happy here. ________________________________________________________________________ (我熱切地期盼著他來我們城市參觀)． 3．At that momen

13、t，I became the focus of the whole class and ______________________(充滿了自豪和自信)． 4．Finally，I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life，_________________(這一定很有趣)． 5．(2019·河北五個(gè)一名校聯(lián)盟·書面表達(dá))_________________________________________ _________________________________________________________

14、_______________ (從你的信中得知你已被劍橋大學(xué)錄取)，I'm more than glad to write to offer my warmest congratulations. 答案：1.Considering the activity is of great value/is meaningful 2．I am eagerly looking forward to his visit to our city 3．was full of great pride and confidence 4．which must be very interesting 5．

15、Knowing you have been admitted to the University of Cambridge from your letter 　　　　　增加相關(guān)信息的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等內(nèi)容 1．(2019·北京卷·書面表達(dá))在那之后，你可以去上海。 After that，you can go to Shanghai. →After that，you can go to Shanghai，where you can stay for a week. 2．(2020·江山市教研二模·應(yīng)用文寫作)作為一個(gè)傳統(tǒng)，中國(guó)學(xué)生總是向老師表達(dá)感激之情。 Chinese students

16、always like to express gratitude to their teachers as a tradition. →With Teachers' Day approaching，Chinese students always like to express gratitude to their teachers as a tradition.(增加時(shí)間) 3．我要和父母一起去超市購(gòu)物。 I'm going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket. →I'm going to do some sho

17、pping with my parents in the supermarket and won't be back until about 5：00 in the afternoon.(增加時(shí)間) 4．我已經(jīng)帶來了你讓我歸還的兩本書。 I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return. →I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.(增加地點(diǎn)) [題組過關(guān)3]——根據(jù)括號(hào)內(nèi)提示完成句子 1．________

18、____________(幾分鐘過去了)but the whole class was in complete silence. 2．The Chinese Silk Road, _____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________(起源于今天 的西安，最后到達(dá)……的東海岸)the Mediterranean，is well-known to the world. 3．I was att

19、racted by the beauty of the city ________________ (一……就……)I arrived here at 6 o'clock in the morning by plane. 4．(2020·臺(tái)州市二模·應(yīng)用文寫作)I'd like to invite you to attend our class meeting next week ____________________(如果你有空)． 答案：1.Several minutes passed 2．which starts from today's Xi'an and finally fi

20、nishes at the east coast of 3．the moment/immediately/as soon as/directly 4．if you are available 　　　　　　　適當(dāng)增加與所給信息相關(guān)的原因、條 件、讓步、手段、目的等內(nèi)容 (2019·全國(guó)卷Ⅰ·書面表達(dá))我能給參觀者介紹中國(guó)的繪畫技術(shù)。 I can introduce Chinese painting skills to visitors. →I can introduce Chinese painting skills to visitors，which can help them

21、 know more about Chinese culture. 1．(2020·舟山市·應(yīng)用文寫作)不久我將成為成年人。 It won't be long before I become an adult. →It won't be long before I become an adult，so I feel very excited as well as a bit nervous.(引起的結(jié)果) 2．(2020·金華市模擬·應(yīng)用文寫作)我們城市將在下個(gè)月15—30號(hào)舉辦絲綢之路國(guó)際藝術(shù)節(jié)(Silk Road International Arts Festival)。 The

22、 Silk Road International Arts Festival will be held in our city from 15th to 30th next month. →Aimed to promote international cultural exchange and cooperation among countries along the Silk Road，the Silk Road International Arts Festival will be held in our city from 15th to 30th next month.(分詞作狀

23、語(yǔ)) 3．假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Henry最近來信詢問你高考后的暑假安排。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面要點(diǎn)寫一封回信，說明你的計(jì)劃，并簡(jiǎn)述理由。①休息；讀書；②參加社會(huì)活動(dòng) ①I need a good rest.I'll do some reading. →I need a good rest because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years.Of course，I'll do some reading for fun，and for knowledge as well.(因果關(guān)系) ②I'll take part in

24、some social activities. →If I have free time，I'll take part in some social activities.(條件狀語(yǔ)) →If possible，I'll take part in some social activities.(條件狀語(yǔ)) →I'll take part in some social activities so that/in order that I can know more about the society.(目的狀語(yǔ)) 4．Tracy來電話說和你在咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)的見面取消

25、。 Tracy called，saying that she couldn't meet you at Bolton Coffee. →Tracy called，saying that she couldn't meet you at Bolton Coffee as she has something important to do.(原因狀語(yǔ)) 5．我也幫助鄰里的孩子補(bǔ)習(xí)英語(yǔ)。 I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons. →I also helped children in the

26、neighborhood with their English lessons.To my joy，they made rapid progress and their parents thought highly of me.(增添結(jié)果) [題組過關(guān)4]——根據(jù)括號(hào)內(nèi)提示完成句子 1．We were happy and returned home ________________________ (我們撿完所有的垃圾之后)． 2．I often join in many activities ________________________ (來和其他同學(xué)交流開拓我的視野)． 3．

27、____________________________(眾所周知)，Earth Hour is an activity which aims at saving energy. 4．(2020·胡州市第一次適應(yīng)性測(cè)試·應(yīng)用文寫作)_________________________________(為了幫助人們了解更多的中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化)，our school is intended to hold a series of activities. 答案：1.after we had finished collecting all the rubbish 2．in order to commu

28、nicate with other students and broaden my eye 3．As is known to all of us 4．To help people learn more about Chinese traditional culture 　　　　　　結(jié)尾適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，寫出個(gè)人感受、評(píng)價(jià)、 希望、倡議等 (2019·北京卷·書面表達(dá))回家后，我與父母分享了我的經(jīng)歷。 When I came back home，I shared my experiences with my parents. →When I came back home，I shared

29、 my experiences with my parents.And they were very proud of me. 1．雖然這個(gè)暑假我覺得很累，但我為我所做的事情感到很高興。 Although I was very tired this summer holiday，I felt very happy for what I did. →Although I was very tired this summer holiday，I felt very happy for what I did because I got a knowledge of farming experi

30、ence.(個(gè)人感受) 2．我想這樣的活動(dòng)是必要的和有意義的。 I think such activities are necessary and meaningful. →I think such activities are necessary and meaningful，from which I learn that we should help people who are in trouble if possible.(評(píng)價(jià)) 3．我們堅(jiān)持堅(jiān)定的信念：游客對(duì)中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)文化將會(huì)知道的越來越多。 We hold the firm belief that the visitrs

31、 will know more about chinese traditional culture. We hold the firm belief that the visitors will know more about Chinese traditional culture，so I hope we students should read more books about Chinese traditional culture in our spare time.(希望) 4．作為一個(gè)學(xué)生，保護(hù)我們的學(xué)校環(huán)境并使它干凈是我們的責(zé)任。 As a student，it's our

32、duty to protect our school environment and make it clean. →As a student，it's our duty to protect our school environment and make it clean.So the Chairman of our school suggests our school hold a series of activities to call on students to take action to do it.(倡議) [題組過關(guān)5]——根據(jù)括號(hào)內(nèi)提示完成句子 1．_________

33、_______________________________________________________________ (作為一個(gè)專業(yè)的籃球運(yùn)動(dòng)員)，he is one of China's bestknown athletes. 2．I think Beijing______________________________________________________________ (非常值得再次參觀)． 3．In my view，_______________________________________________________________ (不管互聯(lián)網(wǎng)

34、多么吸引人)，it shouldn't separate us from our loved ones. 4．________________________________________________________________________(通過這 個(gè)實(shí)驗(yàn)我們得出一個(gè)結(jié)論)：the temperature doesn't change when ice is melting into water. 5．Let's develop good habits of saving energy in our daily life and ______________________

35、_ (盡力為我們的環(huán)境做出更多貢獻(xiàn))． 答案：1.As a professional basketball player 2．is well worth a second visit 3．no matter how attractive the Internet is 4．We drew a conclusion through the experiment 5．try to make more contributions to our environment Ⅰ.按要求對(duì)下列句子進(jìn)行擴(kuò)充 1．我上課認(rèn)真聽講。(增加目的狀語(yǔ)從句) I_listen_to_the_teac

36、hers_carefully_in_the_class_so_that_I_can_understand_what_the_teachers_say. 2．一年一度的“校園書市”(the campus book fair)目的是提供一個(gè)平臺(tái)。(增加定語(yǔ)從句) The_annual_campus_book_fair_aims_to_provide_a_platform_where_students_can_have_a_chance_to_exchange_and_make_use_of_their_books. 3．我經(jīng)常參加體育鍛煉。(增加目的狀語(yǔ)；舉例說明) In_order_to

37、_strengthen_my_body， I_often_take_part_in_different_kinds_of_exercises_with_my_classmates， such_as_playing_football，going_swimming_and_playing_badminton. 4．我經(jīng)常去圖書館閱讀。(增加原因狀語(yǔ)和時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句) Interested_in_reading_books， I_often_go_to_the_library_to_do_some_reading_when_I_am_free. Ⅱ.請(qǐng)為下面的短文適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié) Dear

38、Sam， The College Entrance Examination lasts for two days.The examinees are tested on Chinese，math，the science and arts.We are stressed during the examination and the questions are difficult and complex. 答案： Dear Sam， Thank you for your concern.Now I'll tell you something about the once-a-year Co

39、llege Entrance Examination. There is no doubt that the examination is very important.It lasts for two days from June 7th to 8th.The examinees are tested on Chinese and math on the first day.The science，arts and English are tested on the second day.We are physically and mentally stressed during the examination and the questions are difficult and complex.But we are full of confidence because we are well prepared.We all believe that the fruits of our efforts will be sweet.