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1、高三復(fù)習(xí),writing,高考書面表達(dá)的評(píng)分原則:,按評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分為五個(gè)檔次,第五檔：2125分 第四檔：1620分 第三檔：1115分 第二檔：610分 第一檔：15分 0分,24-25 21-23,19-20 16-18,14-15 11-13,9-10 6-8,4-5 1-3,第一檔 ( 4-5分） 大部分句子可讀性差，只能通詞匯 勉強(qiáng)傳遞少部分信息，詞匯明顯有限，基本 沒(méi)有句子能力。 （1-3分）只能提到零星內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，寫了一些 無(wú)關(guān)內(nèi)容， 無(wú)法傳遞所需信息,Remember: 不要照抄試卷上閱讀或其他的篇章內(nèi)容！,第一 杜絕 0 分,第三檔 （14-15）允許遺漏一個(gè)主要內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，但不影

2、 響預(yù)期的寫作目的。句子雖然有一些錯(cuò)誤， 但基本可讀。至少有2-3個(gè)基本正確的句子并都與不同的主要內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)有關(guān)?；就瓿稍囶}規(guī)定的任務(wù)。,第二 保證15分,第五檔 24-25 1) 覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 2）句式靈活，能合理使用復(fù)合句，非謂語(yǔ) 動(dòng)詞，倒裝句，省略句等語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu) 3）銜接合理，過(guò)度自然，句子流暢，層次 分明，詞匯豐富地道，語(yǔ)氣自然得體。 完全達(dá)到預(yù)期的寫作目的。允許有個(gè)別 語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的小錯(cuò)誤（因盡力 使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，高級(jí)詞匯所致） 21-23 要求同上,允許有2-4個(gè)不影響理解的小錯(cuò)誤,第三 突破20分,書面表達(dá)六步法,2014年高考海南卷英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)題 一家英語(yǔ)報(bào)社向?qū)W生征文，

3、主題是“十年后的我”, 請(qǐng)根 據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)和你的暢想，完成短文。 1 家庭 2 工作 3 業(yè)余生活 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫 3.開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好 I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.,一、審題,文體，人稱，時(shí)態(tài),1 文體：充滿想象的記敘文 2 人稱：I ( we ) 3 時(shí)態(tài)：將來(lái)時(shí),二、抓要點(diǎn),確定要點(diǎn)齊全，寫出和要點(diǎn) 相關(guān)的單詞或短語(yǔ),要點(diǎn)一 家庭 與要點(diǎn)相關(guān)的詞匯： marry , husband , wife , child, house 要點(diǎn)二 工作 與要點(diǎn)相關(guān)的詞匯: t

4、eacher, school, students, English doctor, hospital, patients , save lives 要點(diǎn)三 業(yè)余生活 與要點(diǎn)相關(guān)的詞匯： play basketball/football/ computer games travel, watch movies/TV , read, dance, sing,三、擴(kuò)展成句,把與要點(diǎn)相關(guān)的詞匯擴(kuò)展成 句。為了保證句子正確，最好 寫簡(jiǎn)單句。,要點(diǎn)一 家庭 與要點(diǎn)相關(guān)的詞匯： marry , husband , wife , child, house Ill get married to a beauti

5、ful girl. Ill have a handsome husband. Well have two children, a boy and a girl. Well live in a big house.,要點(diǎn)二 工作 與要點(diǎn)相關(guān)的詞匯： teacher, school, students, English doctor, hospital, patients , save lives Ill be a teacher. Ill teach English in a high school. The students love me very much. .,要點(diǎn)三 業(yè)余生活 與要點(diǎn)相

6、關(guān)的詞匯： play basketball/football/ computer games travel, watch movies/TV ,read, dance. sing I like playing basketball. Ill play basketball with my friends in my spare time. Ill go travelling with my family.,四、連句成文,適當(dāng)使用連接詞把寫出的句 子連成篇章,I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. Ill get marr

7、ied to a beautiful girl. Well have two children, a boy and a girl. Well live in a big house. Ill be a teacher. Ill teach English in a high school. The students love me very much. I like playing basketball. Ill play basketball with my friends in my spare time.,五、查錯(cuò)改錯(cuò),1.注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)等是否正確 2.是否有破句（缺成分） 3.詞數(shù)是

8、否符合要求 4.是否需要合適的開頭與結(jié)尾,I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. Ill get married to a beautiful girl. Well have two children, a boy and a girl. Well live in a big house. Ill be a teacher. Ill teach English in a high school. The students love me very much. I like playing basketball. Ill

9、play basketball with my friends in my spare time.,In ten years, Ill be 28 years old.,who is very gentle and loves me very much.,with a swimming pool.,Ill be a teacher teaching English in a high school.,My English is so excellent that I am popular with the students.,In a word, my life in the future w

10、ill be colorful.,，,and,六、謄寫,修改無(wú)誤后，認(rèn)真規(guī)范地謄寫在規(guī)定的地方。 卷面一定要工整!,美文欣賞：2014年高考書面表達(dá),23分,Practice,2013年高考遼寧卷,一個(gè)英文網(wǎng)站面向中學(xué)生征稿。請(qǐng)你寫一篇英文稿件， 介紹“中秋節(jié)”及這個(gè)節(jié)日里的主要活動(dòng)。寫作要點(diǎn)： 1、它是中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日之一； 2、家人團(tuán)聚； 3、賞月、吃月餅、 4、還有旅游、訪友等其他活動(dòng)。 注意： 1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使用文連貫； 3.開頭語(yǔ)已您寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯： 中秋節(jié): the Mid-Autumn Festival 農(nóng)歷: lunar calenda

11、r 賞月: enjoy the full moon 月餅: moon cake,一、審題,1 說(shuō)明文，介紹中秋節(jié) 2 人稱： it, we 3 時(shí)態(tài)： 現(xiàn)在時(shí),二、抓要點(diǎn),中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日 與要點(diǎn)相關(guān)的詞匯： traditional, festival, China 2 回家和家人團(tuán)聚 與要點(diǎn)相關(guān)的詞匯： come home, get together, family 3 吃月餅，賞月 與要點(diǎn)相關(guān)的詞匯： eat moon cakes ,enjoy the full moon 4,旅游，訪友 travel, visit friends and relatives,三、擴(kuò)展成句,中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日 與要點(diǎn)

12、相關(guān)的詞匯： traditional, festival, China 2 回家和家人團(tuán)聚 與要點(diǎn)相關(guān)的詞匯： go back home, get together, family 3 吃月餅，賞月 與要點(diǎn)相關(guān)的詞匯： eat moon cakes ,enjoy the full moon 4,旅游，訪友 travel, visit friends and relatives,The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the traditional festivals in China.,We usually come home to get together wit

13、h our family.,We eat moon cakes and enjoy the full moon.,We also go travelling and visit our friends and relatives.,四、連句成文,The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the traditional festivals in China. We usually Come back home to get together with our family. We eat moon cakes and enjoy the full moon. We al

14、so go travelling and visit our friends and relatives.,五、查錯(cuò)改錯(cuò),注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)等是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求,是否有破句（缺成分）等。,The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the traditional festivals in China. We usually go home to get together with our family. We eat moon cakes and enjoy the full moon. We also go travelling and visit our friends and relatives.,Thank you !,