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高考英語作文常見錯(cuò)誤剖析及寫作,學(xué)生英語作文中10種常見錯(cuò)誤剖析,1、漢語式思維Seethefilmwilltookmemuchtime.Hehappenedanaccidentyesterday.,2、謂語缺失Hetoldmethatallmyclassmatessittingintheclassroom.Sheintheclassroomyesterday.,3、Therebe句型出錯(cuò)Therearefivestudentsplaybasketballontheplayground.Therearesomeworkersareworkinginthefield.,(Anaccidenthappenedtohimyesterday.),,6、非謂語動(dòng)詞出錯(cuò)Beingseriouslyill,hisclass-matessenthimtohospital.Seeingfromthespace,theearthlookslikeaball.,學(xué)生英語作文中10種常見錯(cuò)誤剖析,4、謂語動(dòng)詞用法出錯(cuò)Hedressedinanewcoat.Greatchangeshavebeentakenplace.WhenIarrivedHongKong,mymotherwastherewaitingforme.Hedidn’tnoticetheteachertocomeintotheclassroom.,5、詞性混用SheenjoysstudyEnglish.Ifanyoneagainsttheplan,pleaseletmeknow.,,,學(xué)生英語作文中10種常見錯(cuò)誤剖析,7、分?jǐn)?shù)與百分?jǐn)?shù)作主語Inourclass,20%sthdentsaregirls,butthreefifthsstudentsareboys.,8、定語從句錯(cuò)誤Thetwoboysarereadingaremybrothers.ThebookIboughtitislost.I’llneverforgetthedayswhenwespentinthevillagetogether.,9、連詞出錯(cuò)Althoughhetried,buthestillcouldn’tkeepupwiththeothers.Mysuggestioniswetryforasecondtime.,10、形容詞、副詞混用Thepatientappearednervouslywhenhetalkedtothedoctor.Theartistworkedhardlytofinishhisdrawingsontime.,,,DearSue,I’mLiHua,isoneofyourstudentsinChina.It’salmostamonthsinceyouleftus.Weallverymissyouandareverygratefulforyoudidforus.Wearebusyasusually.WehadanEnglishspeechcontesttheotherday.Iwonthefirstprize.Thisagainremindsmeofallyourkindhelp.Doyoustillrememberthetreesweplantedthemtogetheronthehillbehindtheschool?Yesterday,wewentthereandwaterthem.Thetreeyouplantedyourselfisgrowinggood,andthewholeclassdecidedtonameitSueWood.WillyoucomebackseeSueWood?Howiseverythingwithyoulately?WehopetoknowmoreaboutyouwithyourAmeicanstudents.Hopetokeepinclosetouch.Allthebest,LiHua,作文修改,,,,實(shí)例寫作,(2010全國Ⅱ)假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國筆友Peter曾表示希望來中國教書。你校現(xiàn)需招聘外教，請(qǐng)給他寫封信，告訴招聘信息。內(nèi)容主要包括：1．教授課程：英語口語、英語寫作、今日美國、今日英國等2．授課對(duì)象：高中生（至少三年英語基礎(chǔ)）3．工作量：—每周12學(xué)時(shí)，任選三門課—擔(dān)任學(xué)生英語俱樂部或英語校報(bào)顧問（advisor）注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．開頭語已為你寫好，請(qǐng)將完整的回信寫出來。DearPeter,IrememberyoutoldmeyouwereinterestedinteachinginChina.________________________________________________________Best,Lihua,寫作技巧點(diǎn)撥,1、提綱式作文為半開放型寫作。,2、要點(diǎn)均為4—5個(gè)（多為4+1個(gè)要點(diǎn)），要點(diǎn)提示比較簡潔，考生111有發(fā)散思維的空間；,3、英語作文多為三段式：1para.——Topicsentence(mainidea,writer’sattitude)2ndpara.——Body(differentpoints)3rdpara.——Ending(writer’sownidea),4、盡量避免第一印象詞匯出現(xiàn),5、好的連詞與表達(dá)法的使用。,提煉文章要點(diǎn)理解每個(gè)要點(diǎn)的含義，然后討論每個(gè)要點(diǎn)的正確表達(dá)方式。形成文章。,范文,DearPeter,IrememberyoutoldmeyouwereinterestedinteachinginChina.①Ourschoolislookingforanative-speakertoteachsomecoursestoseniorhighstudents.②Ifyou’dliketocome,youcanchoosethreeofthefollowingfourcourses:Speaking,Writing,BritainTodayandAmericaToday,andteach12periodsaweek.③ThestudentswhoaregoingtotakethesecourseshaveatleastthreeyearsofEnglishlearningexperiences.④Besidesteaching,youwillalsoworkasanadvisorforourstudents’Englishcluborourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.⑤Pleaseletmeknowifyouareinterestedandifyouhaveanyotherdecisions.Best,Lihua,