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1、Tips on how to enhance the effectiveness of your writing授 課 者 ： 魏 書(shū) 峰 Learning objectives:After this lesson, you are expected to master the following writing skills to achieve the necessary effectiveness of your writing.1. Using some advanced words.2. Using some advanced structures.3. Using Some pro

2、per connective words Criteria and requirements for NMET .覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容；應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致；應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊；達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。第五檔（很好）（2125分）： 策略1. 使用較高級(jí)的詞匯3. 使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞詞匯反映你知識(shí)貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語(yǔ)水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝 。使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，對(duì)寫(xiě)一篇有“英語(yǔ)味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊。2. 使用較豐富的句

3、式 1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.2.We all think he is a great man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.4.The students there neednt pay for their books. 5. As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out / proved to be a failure.Thanks to the good weather, our jou

4、rney was comfortable.一、怎樣使用較高級(jí)的詞匯We all think highly of him .A good idea occurred to me. A good idea suddenly struck me.Books are free of charge for the students there.A good idea flashed into my mind.Owing to/Due to We all regard him as great man.A good idea came to me in a flash. 6. When she heard

5、 he had died, she went pale with sorrow.7. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.On hearing that he had died, she went pale with sorrow. 巧用習(xí)語(yǔ)-增加文采 8.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.

6、9.You can find my house easily. 10.Many houses are being built.Our school consists of twentysix classrooms.Youll have no trouble finding my house. Many houses are under construction. 洋味十足-才是好文章11. I dont want to live with a stranger in a hotel room.12. I was very eager to go home.13. She shouted lou

7、dly , “Ive succeeded!”I dont want to share a hotel room with a stranger.I couldnt wait to go home. I hunger for going home. I long for going home.I am dying to go home.She shouted at the top of her voice, “Ive made it!” 1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.2. To his surprise, the

8、little girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句）3. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用as倒裝句)4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型) 5. I won the competition because of her help.(用虛擬語(yǔ)氣）On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.What surprises him is tha

9、t the little girl knows so many things.二、怎樣使用較豐富的句式Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldnt have won the competition but for your help. 6. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用過(guò)去分詞)7. T

10、hey sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)8.I wont believe what he says. （使用讓步狀語(yǔ)從句） 9.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）10He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒裝句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad .F

11、ollowed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to school.No matter what he says, I wont believe. Study hard and youll make rapid progress. 三、怎樣使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞邏輯角度合適的過(guò)渡性詞匯時(shí)間順序 first, second, then, finally/at last , soon immediately, suddenly空間順序here, there, on one s

12、ideon the other side,in front of, at the back of, next to 對(duì)稱(chēng)順序for one thing, for the other thing, on one hand,on the other hand轉(zhuǎn)折順序but, however, while, though, otherwise因果順序because, since, as, thanks to, as a result (of)條件順序as long as, so long as, on condition that, if, unless讓步順序though, as, even if

13、/though, whether, who (what,when, where)ever遞進(jìn)順序whats more, besides, to make the matter worse,whats worse表示總結(jié)in a word, altogether, all in all, in general 一.補(bǔ)充句子根據(jù)中文意思，將下列英文句子補(bǔ)充完整。1.你給了我許多幫助，也給了我許多鼓舞?？傊?，沒(méi)有你我不能成功。 You gave me much help and encouragement. _ _ _, I couldnt have succeeded without you.In

14、 a word 三 、 怎 樣 使 用 恰 當(dāng) 的 連 接 詞 2.總的說(shuō)來(lái)，你的回答不太令人滿(mǎn)意。 _ _ _, your answer is not so satisfying. 3.一般說(shuō)來(lái)物理比數(shù)學(xué)難學(xué)得多。, physics is much more difficult than mathematics.All in all Generally speaking 4.令我滿(mǎn)意的是，他數(shù)學(xué)考試得了滿(mǎn)分。 _ _ _, he got full marks in the mathematics exam. 5.令我驚恐的是， 我看見(jiàn)他從樹(shù)上摔了下來(lái)。 _ _ _, I saw him fa

15、ll down from the tree. 6.這輛自行車(chē)真的很漂亮，然而我沒(méi)錢(qián)買(mǎi)。 This bike is really very beautiful. , I have no money to buy it.To my satisfaction To my horror Nevertheless 7.他首先去了法國(guó)，然后又去了美國(guó)。 First, he went to France; _ he went to America. 8.令我高興的是， 我終于說(shuō)服她改變了主意。 _ _ _ . I finally persuaded her to change her mind. then

16、To my joy 9.一開(kāi)始他反對(duì)我的計(jì)劃， 但最后他支持我的計(jì)劃了。 At first he was against my plan, but _ _ _ he was for it. 10.你必須購(gòu)買(mǎi)一些生活必需品。 你必須了解一些關(guān)于這個(gè)國(guó)家的信息?？傊?你必須為這次旅行做好準(zhǔn)備。 You should buy some living necessities. You should learn something about this country. _ _ _, you must get everything ready for this journey.In the end I

17、n a word 二. 行文邏輯訓(xùn)練 閱 讀 短 文 ， 選 擇 適 當(dāng) 的 過(guò) 渡 性 詞 匯 填 空 。first, whats worse/more, besides/in addition, now, in my opinion, As far as Im concerned, in my view, from the point of my view. _1_ many middle school students are fat and there are reasons for it. Some eat too much met and too many snacks. Some

18、 sit too long but seldom exercise. Getting fat has quite a few disadvantages. _2_, being fat makes it difficult for one to walk or move as others.Now First _3_ , to be fat usually means to be weak, and it is easy for a fat person to suffer from many kinds of diseases. At the same time. A fat person

19、gets tired easily, which decreases his study efficiency. _4_, to be fat is not a good thing for us middle students. We should try to eat less meat but more vegetables. _ we should try our best to take part in all kinds of sports. If so, we are sure to lose weight and stay healthy.Whats more In my op

20、inion Besides, 三 . 篇 章 結(jié) 構(gòu) 訓(xùn) 練 給 下 面 的 書(shū) 面 表 達(dá) 的 主 題 句 排 序 ：你班同學(xué)參加了學(xué)生雙語(yǔ)報(bào)組織的一場(chǎng)頭論。討論的主題是：城市內(nèi)是否可以飼養(yǎng)寵物。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，給該報(bào)社寫(xiě)一篇文章，介紹討論情況，并說(shuō)明自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)或建議。用5個(gè)句子完成文章。 反對(duì)養(yǎng)寵物的同學(xué)認(rèn)為支持養(yǎng)寵物的同學(xué)認(rèn)為1.造成環(huán)境污染2.可能會(huì)商人1.與孤寡老人做伴2.人與動(dòng)物和諧相處，能增添生活情趣 A. Some students are against the idea of keeping pets. B.Some students think its a go

21、od idea to keep pets. C.I think we can keep pets at home but we must prevent them from polluting our environment. D.Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets or not at home in cities. E.In general, opinions differ from people to people. 請(qǐng) 根 據(jù) 下 列 表 格 的 內(nèi) 容 ， 闡 述 一 下

22、 你 對(duì) 減 少 城 市 人 口的 看 法 。建 議 項(xiàng) 具 體 措 施 目 的1 A.晚 婚B.一 對(duì) 夫 婦 一 個(gè) 孩 子 減 少 人 口 自 然 增 長(zhǎng)（ 人 口 出 生 率 ）2 嚴(yán) 格 控 制 外 地 人 進(jìn) 城 務(wù) 工 經(jīng) 商 減 輕 外 地 人 口 對(duì) 城市 的 壓 力3 A.在 郊 區(qū) ， 建 造 生 活 、 商 業(yè) 、文 教 、 衛(wèi) 生 、 娛 樂(lè) 休 閑 生 活小 區(qū)B. 在 城 市 的 縣 里 建 造 衛(wèi) 星 城 吸 引 城 市 居 民 到 郊區(qū) 和 衛(wèi) 星 城 工 作 和生 活 。Homework Thanks for your attending our class!