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第2講 敘議結合類,【典例】(2013浙江高考) 請以“One Thing I’m Proud of”為題, 用英語寫一篇100-120個詞的短文, 記述一件你自己認為得意的事情。 1. 記敘事情經(jīng)過; 2. 簡要說明你感到得意的原因或從中得到的啟示。 注意: 文章的標題已給出(不計詞數(shù))。,One Thing I’m Proud of ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________,【解題思路】 第一步: 依體裁謀篇章 結構對 第一關 這是一篇敘議結合類文章, 短文的三部分應為: 第一段介紹一件自己認為得意的事情; 第二段記敘事情的經(jīng)過; 第三段說明你感到得意的原因或從中得到的啟示。,第二步: 列要點選句式 要點全 及格線 要點一: 我仍然記得我是如何變成一名好乒乓球運動員的。 _________________________________________________ 要點二: 我去高中學校的第一天, 我看到我的一些同學正在打乒乓球。 ______________________________________________________________ ___________ 要點三: 我真的對這次經(jīng)歷非常驕傲。 _______________________________,I still remember how I became a good table tennis player.,The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing,table tennis.,I’m really proud of this experience.,第三步: 扣主題拓展句 句式美 優(yōu)秀分 要點二拓展: 我去高中學校的第一天, 我看到我的一些同學正在打乒乓 球。(添加事情的發(fā)展、經(jīng)過、結果) ______________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ _____________________,The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing,table tennis. Amazed at how skillful they were, I was determined to be,just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their,techniques. Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to,challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the,best players in my class.,要點三拓展: 我真的對這次經(jīng)歷非常驕傲。(添加驕傲的原因) ____________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _________,I’m really proud of this experience because it helps me realize that we,can all fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work.,It also helps me better understand the proverb “Practice makes,perfect. ”,【現(xiàn)場閱卷作文升格】 學 生 答 卷,我 來 閱 卷 該生習作為四檔作文, 得分為19分。能覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點; 詞匯表達較為熟練, 高級詞匯使用不是很多; 作者句法不錯, 大部分句子都正確, 個別地方出現(xiàn)錯誤。 1. 第二句中的lasts改為lasting, 謂語動詞錯誤, 這句話中is是謂語, last應用非謂語形式。 2. 第三句中的worked后添加as, 搭配錯誤, work as(擔任)。 3. 第五句中的readed應改為read, 動詞形式錯誤, read的過去式為read。 4. 最后一句中benefical應改為beneficial, 單詞拼寫錯誤。,五 檔 作 文 One Thing I’m Proud of I still remember how I became a good table tennis player. The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.,I’m really proud of this experience because it helps me realize that we can all fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb “Practice makes perfect. ”,一、敘議結合類作文“三段式”解題技巧 1. 如果是描述個人經(jīng)歷, 需要簡明扼要地敘述事情情景; 如果是諺語/引語類作文, 首段應引入諺語/引語并解釋其含義, 通過英文釋義讓諺語/引語通俗易懂。 2. 發(fā)表觀點或看法并提供支持觀點的證據(jù)。根據(jù)題目要求, 考生可以通過例子來支持這一經(jīng)歷/諺語/引語。所舉的例子可以來自個人經(jīng)歷、歷史、文學等。最好使用親身經(jīng)歷來寫, 將諺語的深刻含義用貼近生活的實例說明白。,3. 末段重申、總結或提出希望。進一步闡述經(jīng)歷/諺語/引語的意義, 利用其含義提出希望或呼吁。,二、敘議結合類常用詞匯、句型及模板 (一)常用詞匯 1. proverb n. 諺語 2. potential n. 潛力 3. experience n. 經(jīng)歷 4. aspect n. 方面 5. actually adv. 實際上 6. gradually adv. 逐漸地 7. similarly adv. 同樣地 8. appreciate vt. 感激; 感謝 9. cherish vt. 珍惜 10. responsible adj. 有責任心的 11. be determined to do sth. 下定決心做某事 12. be faced with great difficulty面對很大的困難,13. be proud of以……而驕傲 14. be aware of意識到 15. be eager to do sth. 渴望做某事 16. be fed up with厭煩 17. contribute to great progress導致很大進步 18. with the help of sb. 在某人的幫助下 19. from sb. ’s point of view從某人的觀點看 20. get discouraged垂頭喪氣 21. encourage sb. to keep going鼓勵某人不斷前進 22. give up doing sth. 放棄做某事,23. lose heart失去信心 24. attach great importance to重視 25. achieve success獲得成功 26. have trouble/difficulty in在……有困難 27. talk of說到; 談到 28. put sth. into practice把某物付諸于實踐中 29. pay off取得成功 30. make a significant contribution to對……做出突出貢獻 31. take a lesson from從……中汲取教訓 32. volunteer to do sth. 主動去做某事,(二)常用句型 1. 精彩開頭 ①(2015湖南高考)Praise is really magical. Perhaps many of us had such experience. ……或許我們很多人都有這樣的經(jīng)歷。 ②(2014山東高考)My favorite proverb is “Where there’s a will, there’s a way”, which means that if you are really determined to do something, you will find a way of doing it and you will achieve success. 我最喜歡的諺語是……, 意思是……,③(2014福建高考)This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn’t get discouraged right after failure. 來自……的引語告訴我們……,2. 正文佳句 ①(2015湖南高考)Take myself as an example. I was very naughty in the primary school. 以我自己為例…… ②(2014山東高考)Once, I was faced with great difficulty in learning English, especially in vocabulary and grammar. 曾經(jīng), 我面臨……, 尤其是……,③(2014湖北高考)I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. 我可以清晰地記得一件發(fā)生在……的事。 ④(2014湖北高考)A good case in point is that I learned how to ride a bike with great difficulty at the age of twelve. ……是一個很好的例子。 ⑤(2014浙江高考)I fully agree with the proverb and its implication. 我完全同意這個諺語和它的寓意。,3. 余味結尾 ①(2015湖南高考)Every time when I heard others talk to me about my excellent examination result, I thought to myself that I would work even harder and make greater progress. 每次當我聽到別人說起……, 我心中想我會更努力學習并且取得更大的進步。 ②(2014福建高考)We can learn a lot from the proverb and put it into practice. We should stick at what we are doing and only by doing this can we succeed. 我們可以從這句諺語中受益匪淺, 并且付諸實踐中。我們應該……只有這樣做我們才能……,③(2014山東高考)From what I say above, we can see that people with a strong will are more likely to succeed. 綜上所述, 我們可以知道…… ④(2014福建高考)As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society. 作為社會的一份子, 我意識到…… ⑤(2013湖北高考)Judging from the examples given above, we may safely come to the conclusion that words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways. 從上面的例子中, 我們不難推出……,(三)常用模板 The good old proverb“______”(名言或諺語)reminds us that______(釋義). Indeed, we can really benefit much from it. First of all, ____(理由一). For example, ____(舉例說明). Secondly, ____(理由二). Another case is that______(舉例說明). Furthermore, ____(理由三). In my opinion, ____(我的觀點). In short, whatever you do, please remember the saying“______”. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll necessarily achieve a lot from it.,