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初中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作能力的培養(yǎng)施志紅2008 5 07年寫(xiě)作無(wú)現(xiàn)成的范文可套ThingsIhatetodoMostofthetimeIdothingswhichIenjoy However therearestillthingsthatIhatetodo 三 了解評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 07作文分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 內(nèi)容 語(yǔ)言 組織結(jié)構(gòu) 組織結(jié)構(gòu)分1 內(nèi)容充實(shí) 不寫(xiě)廢話 上下文連貫 用語(yǔ)規(guī)范 表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確 無(wú)或少見(jiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤 詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng) 多見(jiàn)好句型和習(xí)慣表達(dá)用語(yǔ)者 可給2分 組織結(jié)構(gòu)分2 一般情況下 內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言在13分以上者 含 方可得到1 2分組織結(jié)構(gòu)分 組織結(jié)構(gòu)分3 內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言在12分以下者 如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表達(dá) 可酌情考慮給1分組織結(jié)構(gòu)分 組織結(jié)構(gòu)分4 通篇句型 句式單一 詞匯貧乏者 即使無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤 一般亦不予給組織結(jié)構(gòu)分 07作文分析舉例Ihatetokeeppetsandtelllies ThethingthatIhatedoingmostissmoking Asweallknow smokingisnotonlybadforourselvesbutalsoharmfultoothers Whenevermyfathersmokes Ifeelrathersick Besides itisawasteofmoneytosmoke Ithink What smore smokingpollutestheair SoIhatesmokingmost A擋 07作文分析舉例Suchasthehousework AlthoughIsometimeshelpmymothertodosomehousework Ireallyhateit Idon tlikewashdishes Ithinkitisuncomfortablethatyoumustputyourhandsintothecoldwaterandthenwashthedirtydishes Idon tlikecleanmyroomaswell Somyroomisalwaysveryuntidy MymothertoldmethatIwasverylazy Idon tthinkso ButIreallyhatedoinghousework B擋 5 6 0 07作文分析舉例SuchasdoingmuchhomeworkandwatchingTV Everyday wemustdoalothomeworkanditmustspendalongtimetofinishit Whenwefinishedit Itwasalready11o clockintheevening SoIhatedoingmuchhomework IlovedwatchingTVwhenIwasachild IalwayswatchingTVforalongtime Soitmakesmyeyesbad That swhyIhatewatchingTVnow C檔 5 5 0 四 培養(yǎng)寫(xiě)作能力 1 指出常見(jiàn)問(wèn)題句型單一東拉西扯時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤用詞不當(dāng) 2 提醒注意事項(xiàng)圍繞中心意思連貫學(xué)會(huì)審題注意文體研究考試 3 避免指導(dǎo)缺失光給一個(gè)題目沒(méi)有任何鋪墊不考慮學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)基礎(chǔ)和生活實(shí)際 4 全面多方指導(dǎo)狠抓聽(tīng)說(shuō)訓(xùn)練重視基礎(chǔ)落實(shí)介紹寫(xiě)作技巧豐富訓(xùn)練方法落實(shí)作文批改 小結(jié)一 明確教學(xué)目標(biāo)二 把握變化走向三 了解評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)四 培養(yǎng)寫(xiě)作能力 1 指出常見(jiàn)問(wèn)題2 明確寫(xiě)作要求3 避免指導(dǎo)缺失4 全面多方指導(dǎo) Thanksforlistening 1 1Mymotherisateacher Sheis Sheis Sheis Sheis Ilikeherverymuch Thisisourschool Thereis Thereis Thereare Thereare Ilikeitverymuch 1 2Mymotherisfortyyearsold butshelooksyoung Sheisadoctorandherhospitalisnotfarawayfromourhome soshegoestoworkbybike Sheworkshardandisalwayskindtoherpatients Athomeshedoesalotofhouseworkandoftenhelpsmewithmylessons IthinkmymotheristhebestmotherintheworldandIloveherverymuch 73詞 1 3OurschoolislocatedinthecentreofShanghaiItwasbuiltin1950 Nowthereareabout200teachersand2000studentsinourschool Wehavealanguagelab acomputerroomandabiglibraryinourschool Wearegoingtobuildanewclassroombuildingnextyear Ourschoolwillbecomebiggerandmorebeautifulinthefuture 63詞 2 1LastweekIgotanAinthetest I mveryhappyaboutitandI lltrymybesttolearnEnglishbetterandbetter IknowitisveryimportanttolearnEnglishwell IbegantolearnEnglishwhenIwaseightyearsold However withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates I vemadegreatprogress ButsometimesIfounditsodifficultthatInearlygaveitup 2 2IbegantolearnEnglishwhenIwaseightyearsold IknowitisveryimportanttolearnEnglishwell ButsometimesIfounditsodifficultthatInearlygaveitup However withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates I vemadegreatprogress LastweekIgotanAinthetest I mveryhappyaboutitandI lltrymybesttolearnEnglishbetterandbetter 3 1MrWangusedtosmokealot Hefeelillandgotoseethedoctor Thedoctortoldhimsmokingisbadforhishealth MrWangisgoingtotakethedoctor sadvice Hedecidedtogiveupsmoking Hiswifeanddaughterwereveryhappy 4 1Dogsaremen sbestfriends Dogscanhelpblindmen Theycantakethemeverywhere Theyareveryclever Theycanalsohelpthepolicementocatchrobbers Theycanhelppeopletobuynewspapers Somedogscancalculate Dogsareourbestfriends Weshouldprotectthem Weshouldtakecareofthem Don thurtourbestfriends 4 2Dogsaremen sbestfriends Theyalwaysgiveusalotofhelp Inancienttime theyhelpedmenhuntanimalsandkepttheircavessafe Now dogshelppolicementocatchrobbersandfindlostpeople What smore somedogscanevenhelpblindmen Theyshowthemthewayanddoalotofthingsforthem Wecallthiskindofdogsguidedogs andtheyareblindmen seyes Inaword dogsarenotonlyourpets butalsoourbestfriends 5 1Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic Growingpainsandgains Thepicturesbelowareforyourreferenceonly 以 成長(zhǎng)的煩惱與歡樂(lè) 為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文 標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格 以下圖片僅供參考 05中考 5 2112 Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic IHaveaDream 以 我有一個(gè)夢(mèng)想 為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文 標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格 注意 短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名 校名及其他相關(guān)信息 否則不予評(píng)分 Sentencepatternsforreference 以下句型僅供參考 Mydreamistobe todo togo Ienjoy like prefer Tomakemydreamcometrue I Ifmydreamcomestrue 06中考 5 3Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic ThingsIHatetoDo 以 我不喜歡 為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文 標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格 注意 短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名 校名及其他相關(guān)信息 否則不予評(píng)分 段文開(kāi)頭已給 所給部分不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù) Usethefollowingpointsasaguide 短文須包含下列要點(diǎn) Whatarethethingsthatyouhatetodo Whatdoyouhatedoingmost Why Giveatleasttworeasons ThingsIHatetoDoMostofthetimeIdothingswhichIenjoy However therearestillthingsthatIhatetodo 07中考 6 1短文對(duì)話信件日記 7 1寫(xiě)人物寫(xiě)事件寫(xiě)物件寫(xiě)場(chǎng)所夾敘夾議 7 203年 TobealovelyShanghainese 做可愛(ài)的上海人 04年 Leavingschool 畢業(yè)時(shí)分 05年 Growingpainsandgains 成長(zhǎng)的煩惱與快樂(lè) 06年 Ihaveadream 我有一個(gè)夢(mèng)想 07年 ThingsIhatetodo 我不喜歡 8 1培養(yǎng)良好書(shū)寫(xiě)習(xí)慣單詞形義常抓不懈介紹基本句子成分理清五種基本句型 Whowillwin 主語(yǔ) 不及物動(dòng)詞 主語(yǔ) 及物動(dòng)詞 賓語(yǔ) 主語(yǔ) 聯(lián)系動(dòng)詞 表語(yǔ) 主語(yǔ) 及物動(dòng)詞 雙賓語(yǔ) 主語(yǔ) 及物動(dòng)詞 復(fù)合賓語(yǔ) WestudyEnglish Thegirllookspretty Mumgivesmeapresent Heaskedustogothere 8 2簡(jiǎn)單句的五種基本句型 9 1學(xué)會(huì)使用過(guò)渡詞或連接詞鼓勵(lì)使用狀語(yǔ)從句 賓語(yǔ)從句恰當(dāng)使用英語(yǔ)習(xí)語(yǔ) 諺語(yǔ) 9 2表示并列and or also too aswell表示轉(zhuǎn)折but however yet while though otherwise表示遞進(jìn)what smore besides inaddition表示讓步though although evenif whether nowthat whatever whenever表示因果because becauseof since asaresultof thanksto 9 3表示條件if unless表示對(duì)稱foronething fortheotherthing 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