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時(shí)間：20～25分鐘/篇 　命題規(guī)律 分析全國(guó)近3年的中考真題可知，書(shū)面表達(dá)對(duì)“做法建議類”的話題考查比重最大，幾乎是各地市命題人每年最青睞的選題方向。我們通過(guò)全面分析和總結(jié)發(fā)現(xiàn)，該話題主要側(cè)重以下六個(gè)方面： ①人物行為方面。如：xx自貢、黔東南、朝陽(yáng)、淮安、泰州、漳州；xx北京、重慶A卷、梧州等； ②學(xué)習(xí)方面。如：xx安徽、武漢、黃石、南寧、齊齊哈爾；xx重慶A卷、昆明等； ③人際方面。如：xx宜賓、畢節(jié)、安順、綏化、嘉興(舟山)、鹽城等； ④環(huán)保方面。如：xx玉林、廣安、甘肅、連云港、梧州等； ⑤安全方面。如：xx桂林、宿遷；xx安徽等； ⑥健康方面。如：xx來(lái)賓；xx樂(lè)山、畢節(jié)等。 　好詞好句 1. Safety/Health... is the most important thing in our life. 2. Here are some of my suggestions. 3. Id like to share my ideas with you. 4. We should try our best to protect the environment. 5. To keep healthy, we should eat less junk food. 6. You mustnt smoke. Its bad for your health. 7. Its a good idea to have more healthy food like fruit and vegetables. 8. Its our duty to protect ourselves. Lets start from today. 9. In my opinion, students should pay more attention to their own safety. 10. Maybe you find it difficult to do. But if you try hard, I believe youll find it. 　寫(xiě)作練兵 第1篇(xx安徽) (25分)假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Jack來(lái)信，說(shuō)他暑假期間要來(lái)中國(guó)交流學(xué)習(xí)。他學(xué)了兩年中文，但是仍然擔(dān)心用中文交流時(shí)會(huì)遇到困難。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給Jack寫(xiě)封回信，提幾點(diǎn)建議，要點(diǎn)如下： 1. 大膽自信； 2. 放慢語(yǔ)速； 3. 借助圖畫(huà)或肢體語(yǔ)言等表達(dá)方式。 注意：1. 詞數(shù)80～100； 2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3. 信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息； 4. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯：自信的confident　肢體語(yǔ)言body language Dear Jack， How is everything going? I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer.________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua 第2篇(xx武漢) (15分)初中生活即將結(jié)束，學(xué)校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部特邀你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，給七年級(jí)新生的學(xué)習(xí)生活提幾點(diǎn)建議。 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下： 1. 初中科目更多，好的學(xué)習(xí)方法很重要； 2. 鍛煉身體，保持健康； 3. 參加社團(tuán)活動(dòng)，使學(xué)校生活豐富； 4. 多讀書(shū)，多交朋友； 5. 補(bǔ)充一兩點(diǎn)個(gè)人想法。 注意： 1. 文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 2. 詞數(shù)：60－80； 3. 內(nèi)容連貫，不要逐條翻譯； 4. 短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯：method n. 方法　club n．社團(tuán)　colorful adj.豐富的 Welcome to our school! ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 第3篇(xx自貢) (20分)你校將于近期舉辦一場(chǎng)主題為“怎樣成為一名受歡迎的學(xué)生”的演講比賽，假如你是王華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)和要求，以“How to be a popular student？”為題，寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的英語(yǔ)演講稿。文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 要點(diǎn)：1.衣著整潔，常常微笑； 2．誠(chéng)實(shí)善良，樂(lè)于助人； 3．懂得與他人分享； 4．其它。 要求：1.內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言流暢，不要逐句翻譯，自由地適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 2．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名，校名和其他真實(shí)信息。 How to be a popular student? Hello, everyone! I am Wang Hua...________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Thats all. Thank you for your listening. 第4篇(xx十堰) (15分)這次考試結(jié)束以后，你將怎樣度過(guò)一個(gè)有意義的暑假，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇文章給你自己和小伙伴們一些好的建議，內(nèi)容必須包括以下要點(diǎn)： ①走親訪友，和家人一起共度美好時(shí)光。 ②和好朋友們一起看電影，聽(tīng)音樂(lè)…… ③假期我們應(yīng)該加強(qiáng)體育鍛煉，增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)。 ④你還有什么別的建議(至少兩條)。 要求：1. 字?jǐn)?shù)80－100，不要逐條翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名。 3. 行文連貫，條理清晰，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。 4. 標(biāo)題和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。 How to Take a Meaningful Summer Vacation after the Exam It is necessary to take a meaningful summer vacation after the exam. There are kinds of activities for us to take part in. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 第5篇(xx畢節(jié)) (20分)最近從媒體報(bào)道的一些家庭事件來(lái)看，孩子與父母的關(guān)系不和諧，隔閡越來(lái)越大，孩子普遍存在逆反心理。針對(duì)這個(gè)問(wèn)題，某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)社開(kāi)展了主題為“與父母和諧相處”的征文大賽。作為一名初中畢業(yè)生，你一定有自己的思想與辨別是非的基本能力，但你是否曾想過(guò)應(yīng)該怎樣和自己的父母相處呢？請(qǐng)以“How to Get on Well with Our Parents？”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文參加此次征文大賽。 一、寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)提示 1. 與父母和諧相處很重要。 2. 與父母和諧相處的做法或建議： (1)理解與尊重父母(如傾聽(tīng)與有禮貌表達(dá)想法)； (2)多與父母交流(如分享快樂(lè)與傾訴煩惱)； (3)為父母做一些力所能及的事。 3. 與父母和諧相處的感受。 二、寫(xiě)作要求 短文應(yīng)緊扣要點(diǎn)，但不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使短文銜接、連貫，詞數(shù)控制在80－100詞。 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 第6篇(xx鹽城) (20分)學(xué)校將舉辦英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作比賽。請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給提示，以“Getting along well with others”為題，寫(xiě)一篇參賽短文。 注意事項(xiàng)：1. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右(文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))； 2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息； 3. 文章必須包含所提供的主要信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 Getting along well with others No one can live without keeping in with others. Therefore, its important for us to learn how to________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 第7篇(xx宜賓) (15分)班級(jí)將舉辦英語(yǔ)演講比賽，請(qǐng)根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖，以“How to Be Happy”為題目，寫(xiě)一篇90詞左右的演講稿。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。 要求：1.短文應(yīng)條理清楚，行文連貫，段落分明。 2．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、學(xué)校、地名等信息。 3．短文應(yīng)包括全部信息，可圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 Good morning, everybody! The topic I want to talk about today is “How to Be Happy”. The following are my suggestions. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Thats what I want to share with you. Thank you! 第8篇(xx嘉興) (20分)英語(yǔ)課上，你們開(kāi)展了一次以“What can we do to make home a happier place？”為主題的討論，同學(xué)們把自己的想法寫(xiě)在卡片上。請(qǐng)結(jié)合卡片信息，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，向校刊English Learning投稿。 注意：(1)短文必須包括卡片所給的信息，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，并談?wù)勛约旱南敕ā? (2)文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息。 (3)詞數(shù)：80～100。短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 短文首句：In our English class, we had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 第9篇(xx廣安) (10分)健康的身體是我們中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的保證。但是網(wǎng)絡(luò)搶走了我們的鍛煉時(shí)間，垃圾食品威脅著我們的健康。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示，以“How to Keep Healthy”為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。 提示：1. 堅(jiān)持鍛煉； 2. 健康飲食； 3. 合理上網(wǎng)； 4. 充足的睡眠； 5. 保持愉快的心情。 要求：1. 不要逐條翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 2. 詞數(shù)：80字左右。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名，校名等相關(guān)信息。 參考詞匯：junk food(垃圾食品) How to Keep Healthy Its important for us to keep healthy. As a middle school student, we should have a healthy lifestyle. Here are some suggestions. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 第10篇(xx宿遷) (15分)為增強(qiáng)安全意識(shí)，學(xué)校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部將開(kāi)展“如何提升自我保護(hù)能力”的討論。請(qǐng)以“How to protect ourselves” 為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。內(nèi)容必須包括以下要點(diǎn)： 1. 尊敬師長(zhǎng)，與同學(xué)友好相處； 2. 公共場(chǎng)所，舉止文明，不追逐打鬧； 3. 不亂交網(wǎng)友，不泄露個(gè)人信息； 4. ……(自主發(fā)揮，至少兩點(diǎn)) 注意事項(xiàng)：1. 詞數(shù)90左右，標(biāo)題與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名、人名等信息。 How to protect ourselves ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Danger is never as far away as we think. Take good care of ourselves at all times! 第11篇(xx漳州) (14分)現(xiàn)在各行各業(yè)都在為建設(shè)美麗中國(guó)而努力奮斗，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面圖示談?wù)勔韵聨追N職業(yè)是怎樣做貢獻(xiàn)的。作為學(xué)生，你又該怎么做？ 要求：1. 短文需包含提示要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右(開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))； 3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。 Now all the Chinese people are making contributions to building beautiful China. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 第12篇(xx連云港) (25分)為響應(yīng)我市全面創(chuàng)建國(guó)家衛(wèi)生城市的號(hào)召，某校開(kāi)展了“綠色港城，健康生活”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你以“The Green City, the Healthy Life”為題，根據(jù)表格中的圖片及文字提示，簡(jiǎn)要描述并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。 注意：(1)詞數(shù)90左右，短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； (2)文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。 主題 綠色港城，健康生活 做法 騎車出行，減少空氣污染；垃圾入箱，保持城市整潔；多種樹(shù)木，保護(hù)自然環(huán)境。 你的觀點(diǎn) ……(至少2條) The Green City, the Healthy Life As a citizen of Lianyungang, its our duty to ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 第13篇(xx蘇州) 上海迪斯尼樂(lè)園于今年6月16日正式開(kāi)放，許多孩子打算前往游玩。假如你是一名樂(lè)園的志愿者，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列表格中的要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)向孩子們介紹樂(lè)園并提醒他們文明游園。 上海東部，地鐵可達(dá) 由6個(gè)主題公園組成 參加活動(dòng)，欣賞表演 購(gòu)買禮物，觀看煙火 文 明 游 園 不扔垃圾，保持整潔 考生自擬(至少2點(diǎn)) 注意：1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 2. 短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順； 3. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。 參考詞匯：theme n．主題； firework n．煙火 Good morning, children! As a volunteer from Shanghai Disneyland, Id like to say something about the park and tell you how to behave well in it. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ The park is worth your visit. I hope you will have fun. 專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練三 做法建議類 第1篇 【審題指導(dǎo)】 1. 對(duì)于此類建議類作文，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵詞等。寫(xiě)作中注意將所列的幾點(diǎn)建議介紹清楚，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作中注意做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系； 2. 構(gòu)思過(guò)程時(shí)，以題目所給的要點(diǎn)提示為提綱，圍繞提綱進(jìn)行信息擴(kuò)充，然后運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)，如first, second, third...以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、層次分明。為了增強(qiáng)文章的可讀性，注意長(zhǎng)短句的交替使用，特別是一些主從復(fù)合句的運(yùn)用。 【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】 一封回信：就漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)提建議 要點(diǎn)提示 素材串聯(lián) 正文：給出建議 我很樂(lè)意分享我的想法(share) 第一(First)：與人交流時(shí)，大膽自信(be brave，be confident) 第二(Second)：放慢語(yǔ)速(speak slowly)，使別人更好地理解你 第三(Third/Whats more)：借助圖畫(huà)或肢體語(yǔ)言等表達(dá)方式(drawing, picture, body language ) 【高分范文】 Dear Jack， How is everything going? I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer. Its not necessary to worry about your Chinese. Id like to share my ideas, which I think might help. First, be brave enough to speak Chinese when you communicate with others. Its of great importance to be confident about yourself. We Chinese are very friendly so you neednt be afraid of making any mistakes.Second, its better to speak slowly and clearly. In this way you can make yourself understood more easily. Whats more, sometimes you can use drawings or pictures, and as you know, body language is also widely used across cultures and very often it really works.Best wishes！ Yours，Li Hua 第2篇 【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】 給新生的幾點(diǎn)建議 要點(diǎn)提示 素材串聯(lián) 開(kāi)頭：交代主題 1. 一名畢業(yè)生(a graduating student)2. 分享一些經(jīng)驗(yàn)(share some experience) 正文：給出建議 第一：初中學(xué)習(xí)科目很多，好的學(xué)習(xí)方法很重要(the learning method is very important)第二：鍛煉身體，保持健康(do more exercises, keep healthy)第三：參加社團(tuán)活動(dòng)，使學(xué)校生活豐富(take part in)第四：多讀書(shū)，多交朋友(make friends)第五：好好地和老師、同學(xué)相處(get on well with)第六：認(rèn)真計(jì)劃時(shí)間(plan your time carefully) 結(jié)尾：總結(jié)感受 希望你喜歡你的新學(xué)校生活(enjoy your new school life) 【高分范文】 Welcome to our school! As a graduating student, Id like to share some experience about school life with you.First, there are more subjects for you to learn in middle school, so the learning method is very important. Second, youd better do more exercises. If you keep healthy, you can study well. Third, there are different kinds of club activities. You need to take an active part in them and make your school life colorful. Also you can read books and make friends. And you should learn to get on well with your teachers and classmates. Being friendly and helpful is also very important. Besides, you should plan your time carefully because you will have much more homework than before.I hope you will enjoy your new school life. 第3篇 【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】 怎樣成為受歡迎的學(xué)生？ 要點(diǎn)提示 素材串聯(lián) 開(kāi)頭：直奔主題 我想成為“一名受歡迎的學(xué)生”(I want to be a popular student...) 正文：提出建議 1. 衣著整齊，常常微笑(clean and tidy; keep smiling)2. 誠(chéng)實(shí)善良、樂(lè)于助人(honest and kind；help)3. 懂得與他人分享(know how to share...with others) 結(jié)尾：提出希望 希望大家支持我……(support) 【高分范文】 How to be a popular student? Hello, everyone! Im Wang Hua. Today I come to take part in the speech because I want to be a popular student. But how can we be popular students? I think we should do the following things at least.Firstly, we should keep our clothes clean and tidy. We should also keep a good mood and keep smiling. Secondly, as popular students, we should be honest and kind. We should try our best to help those people who meet troubles. Thirdly, knowing how to share our love, happiness, sadness and other things with others is very important. It can make us know about each other well. To be a popular student, I will try my best to do all things well. Please support me! Thats all. Thank you for your listening. 第4篇 【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】 怎樣度過(guò)一個(gè)有意義的暑假 要點(diǎn)提示 素材串聯(lián) 開(kāi)頭：引出話題 已給出 正文：提出建議建議 1：走親訪友，和家人一起共度美好時(shí)光(visit relatives and friends，spend happy time with our family)建議2：和好朋友們一起看電影(see a film)，聽(tīng)音樂(lè)(listen to music)……建議3：假期我們應(yīng)該加強(qiáng)體育鍛煉(take more exercise)，增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)(keep healthy)建議4：復(fù)習(xí)功課(review)建議5：幫助父母干家務(wù)活(do some housework) 結(jié)尾：表達(dá)期望 希望所有人度過(guò)一個(gè)愉快的暑假(have a pleasant vacation) 【高分范文】 How to Take a Meaningful Summer Vacation after the Exam It is necessary to take a meaningful summer vacation after the exam. There are kinds of activities for us to take part in.First, we can visit our relatives and friends or spend happy time with our family. Second, seeing a film, listening to music or hanging out with our friends will also be wonderful. Third, we should take more exercise to keep healthy. Whats more, we had better review what we have learned in middle school. Finally, it is necessary for us to do some housework, which can help our parents a lot.Above all, I hope all of us can have a pleasant vacation. 第5篇 【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】 如何與父母和諧相處？ 要點(diǎn)提示 素材串聯(lián) 開(kāi)頭：點(diǎn)明重要性 跟父母和諧相處非常重要(get on well with sb.; be of great importance) 正文：具體做法 1.最重要的是：理解、尊重父母(The most important thing is that...; understand, respect)2.與此同時(shí)，和他們多交流(Meanwhile; communicate with sb.)3.最后，但同等重要的是：幫助父母做家務(wù)(Last but not least; do some housework) 結(jié)尾：感受 如果這樣做，就能擁有一個(gè)幸福的家庭(If we do...well...; full of ) 【高分范文】 How to Get on Well with Our Parents? Getting on well with parents is of great importance. But many children have trouble in communicating well with their parents. Here are some suggestions on this problem.The most important thing is that we should understand and respect our parents. We can listen to what they think and express our thoughts politely. Meanwhile, communicate with them as often as possible to share happiness and sorrows. Last but not least, we can help them do some housework.If we do like this, well have a family full of happiness. 第6篇 【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】 與他人和睦相處 要點(diǎn)提示 素材串聯(lián) 開(kāi)頭：引出話題 懂得如何與他人相處非常重要(how to get along with all kinds of people) 正文：提出建議 首先(First of all)，對(duì)朋友要友好(be friendly to)，朋友是我們分享喜悅和悲傷的好伙伴(share joy and sadness) 其次(Besides)，要樂(lè)于助人(be ready to help others)。比如(For example)，經(jīng)常幫助鄰居(help our neighbours)，他們會(huì)成為我們的好朋友(become our good friends)而且(Whats more)，多和他人交流(communicate with)。比如(For instance)，與父母經(jīng)常交談(talk to)，他們會(huì)明白我們愛(ài)他們有多深(deeply)最后但同等重要的是(Last but not least)，應(yīng)該尊重他人(respect others)，特別是老師和老人(especially our teachers and the old) 結(jié)尾：總結(jié)全文，呼應(yīng)主題 總之(All in all)，只有這樣(only in these ways)，我們才可以與別人融洽相處(get along well with others) 【高分范文】 Getting along well with others No one can live without keeping in with others. Therefore, its important for us to learn how to get along with all kinds of people. First of all, we should be friendly to our friends. They are our good partners who share joy and sadness with us. Besides, wed better be ready to help others. For example, if we always help our neighbours do some volunteer work, they will become our good friends. Whats more, we must communicate with others so that we can understand each other better. For instance, if we often talk to our parents, they will know we love them deeply. Last but not least, we are supposed to respect others, especially our teachers and the old. All in all, only in these ways can we get along well with others. 第7篇 【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】 怎樣才能快樂(lè) 要點(diǎn)提示 素材串聯(lián) 開(kāi)頭：引出話題 已給出 正文：提出建議 第一：有生活目標(biāo)，知道自己要做什么(know what to do) 第二：保持健康，養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣；做運(yùn)動(dòng)(life habits; take exercise) 第三：幫助他人，通過(guò)幫助別人獲得幸福感(gain happiness; help others) 結(jié)尾：感謝傾聽(tīng) 已給出 【高分范文】 Good morning, everybody! The topic I want to talk about today is “How to Be Happy”. The following are my suggestions.Firstly, I think we should have life aims. When we have life aims, we will know what to do. For example, I want to be a writer, so I will try to read a lot of books and write more to improve my writing skills. Secondly, we have to keep healthy. Without health, we cant enjoy anything, therefore we should form good life habits, and take exercise every day. Thirdly, we should help others. We can gain happiness by helping others, and we can make new friends in this way.Thats what I want to share with you. Thank you！ 第8篇 【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】 關(guān)于如何做會(huì)使家庭更幸福的討論 要點(diǎn)提示 素材串聯(lián) 正文：提出建議 第一：和家人共度時(shí)光(spend more time with family)第二：分享快樂(lè)和擔(dān)憂(share happiness and worries)第三：記住家人的生日(remember familys birthdays) 結(jié)尾：自己的想法 向家人表現(xiàn)愛(ài)很有必要(show love; necessary) 【高分范文】 In our English class, we had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place. We shared different ideas. Some say its better to spend more time with family. The more we get together, the better we understand each other. Family members should share happiness and worries. For example, when they have problems, we should try to cheer them up. Others believe its important to remember familys birthdays and give small presents to our family on their birthdays. I think, showing love for family is necessary. If we help with housework, they may feel warmer. Sometimes, even the smallest thing like walking with family makes them happier. Though were young, we can do much to make a happier home. 第9篇 【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】 如何保持健康 要點(diǎn)提示 素材串聯(lián) 開(kāi)頭：直接點(diǎn)題 已給出 正文：具體建議 1. 鍛煉(exercise)：每天至少一小時(shí)(at least)2. 健康飲食(healthy diet)：多吃水果和蔬菜(fruit and vegetables)，盡量不吃垃圾食品(junk food)3. 上網(wǎng)(go online)：時(shí)間不宜太長(zhǎng)，對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)和眼睛有害(be bad for)4. 充足的睡眠(enough sleep)：早睡，不熬夜(go to bed early; stay up)5. 愉快的心情(be happy)：隨時(shí)保持微笑(at any time) 結(jié)尾：總結(jié)全文 做到這些，就會(huì)保持健康(keep healthy) 【高分范文】 How to Keep Healthy Its important for us to keep healthy. As a middle school student，we should have a healthy lifestyle. Here are some suggestions.First, we should do exercise at least one hour a day, such as running or walking. Second, have a healthy diet. Eat more fruit and vegetables. Try not to eat junk food. Third, wed better not spend too much time going online. Its bad for our study and eyes. Fourth, go to bed early and dont stay up too late, because enough sleep is good for our health. Finally, be happy as possible as we can. Learn to smile at ourselves at any time. If we can do so, I believe we can keep healthy. 第10篇 【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】 如何保護(hù)自己 要點(diǎn)提示 素材串聯(lián) 開(kāi)頭：引出話題 保護(hù)自己很重要(important)，如何保護(hù)自己 正文：提出建議 1. 尊敬師長(zhǎng)，與同學(xué)友好相處(respect, get on well with)2. 公共場(chǎng)所，舉止文明，不追逐打鬧(in public, behave well, run after)3. 不亂交網(wǎng)友，不泄露個(gè)人信息(be careful, information)4. 健康飲食(eat more healthy food)5. 遵守交通規(guī)則(obey the traffic rules) 結(jié)尾：強(qiáng)調(diào)重要性 已給出 【高分范文】 How to protect ourselves No matter what we do, it is the most important to learn to protect ourselves. Well, how can we students protect ourselves？First, we should respect the teachers and elders, and at the same time, we need to get on well with our classmates. Secondly, behave well in public and dont run after each other. Thirdly, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. We shouldnt give our exact personal information to others. Last but not least, its important for us to eat more healthy food and obey the traffic rules. Danger is never as far away as we think. Take good care of ourselves at all times！ 第11篇 【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】 建設(shè)美麗中國(guó) 要點(diǎn)提示 素材串聯(lián) 其它行業(yè) ●科學(xué)家：發(fā)明更多有用的東西，使國(guó)家更好(make...better)●醫(yī)生：全力挽救生命、幫助病人保持健康(try ones best to do sth.; keep healthy)●警察：保護(hù)人民、幫助處于危險(xiǎn)中的人(work hard to do sth.; in danger)●農(nóng)民：種植更多更好的食物(more and better food) 學(xué)生 1. 應(yīng)該努力學(xué)習(xí)，提高自己(be supposed to) 2. 以后為國(guó)家的美麗富強(qiáng)貢獻(xiàn)力量(make it more beautiful and stronger) 【高分范文】 Now all the Chinese people are making contributions to building beautiful China. Its scientists duty to invent more useful things to make our country better. Doctors are trying their best to save patients lives and help them keep healthy. Policemen work hard toprotect people and help those who are in danger. Farmers do their best to grow more and better food for us. As for students, we are supposed to study hard and improve ourselves. A few years later, we are sure to work for our country and make it more beautiful and stronger. 第12篇 【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】 綠色港城，健康生活 要點(diǎn)提示 素材串聯(lián) 開(kāi)頭：引出主題 創(chuàng)建綠色港城是我們的職責(zé)(Its our duty to do sth.) 正文：做法建議 1. 騎車出行，減少空氣污染(ride bicycles, reduce air pollution)2. 垃圾入箱，保持城市整潔(rubbish, keep our city clean)3. 多種樹(shù)木，保護(hù)自然環(huán)境(plant more trees, protect the environment) 結(jié)尾：你的觀點(diǎn) 1. 節(jié)約用水：洗澡時(shí)間短一點(diǎn)(save water)2. 節(jié)約能源：出門關(guān)燈(save energy) 3. 總之，每個(gè)人都可以做出貢獻(xiàn) 【高分范文】 The Green City, the Healthy Life As a citizen of Lianyungang, its our duty to help build a green city so that we can live a healthy life. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. Its better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean. And wed better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.In my opinion, Ill try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone